Seren Roberts Poet Acrostic

Paradise - Contest

Paradise is where your happiest
A very personal thing.
Remembering sunny days,
An ice cream cone, a diamond ring.
Dancing in the moonlight
I would snuggle into your chest
Softly touching your skin, was my delight,
Easily, loving you, was paradise at best

Penned 20 December 2015

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Skat A December 28, 2015 at 10:17 PM Seren, a very nice win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2015 at 4:20 AM Seren, Congratulations on your win. LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 28, 2015 at 2:03 AM Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic Seren.. congrats on big win!

Robert Lindley December 27, 2015 at 6:14 PM Simplicity, love wrapped in serenity in your paradise my friend!! A7 Congrats on your fine win!!

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2015 at 3:12 PM Sounds like a marvelous paradise, Seren. Congrats for your win.

Michael Tor December 27, 2015 at 10:51 AM Very nice Seren Congratulations on your win.

Susan Gentry December 27, 2015 at 8:17 AM Congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus December 27, 2015 at 3:16 AM A delightful paradise built on a romantic personal experience...I love it! Congrats on this lovely win, Seren! ~ Regards // paul

John Hamilton December 27, 2015 at 12:01 AM Very nice poem Seren, congrats on your placement.

Tim Gleason December 24, 2015 at 12:15 AM where is this place that I may ponder ? Seren Roberts December 24, 2015 at 12:19 AM That's a secret . thanks for stopping by....Seren

John Hamilton December 20, 2015 at 4:28 PM Forgot to enter contest?

Anne-Lise Andresen December 20, 2015 at 5:22 AM - A lovely poem, Seren :) - Today I just want to wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas ! - Huge Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :) Seren Roberts December 20, 2015 at 10:12 AM Thank you so much,may I wish you a wonderful Christmas with loads of beautiful memories to write about...return the Christmas hugs with a smile ...Seren