Beautiful Scars Poet Acrostic

Paradise Acrostic Contest

Paradise Acrostic Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton


P ieces and pieces of our amorous puzzle

A live and content with our exotic island

R eminders of our affections, trustful

A nd in your hand diamonds so vibrant

D ebris of failures tossed at the sea

I nto our bed covered with white roses

S ensual dancing to the highest degree

E veryday is paradise as the door closes


Date Written: December 20, 2015

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Skat A December 28, 2015 at 10:20 PM Laura, a very nice win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2015 at 4:22 AM Laura, Congratulations on your win. LINDA

Robert Lindley December 27, 2015 at 6:31 PM A sensual paradise that rewards sharing and deep love! Such giving of self , would be your partner's bliss and your delighted heart!A7 Congratulations on your win!! Beautiful Scars December 27, 2015 at 6:35 PM Thank you very much Robert! -luloo *smiles*

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2015 at 3:18 PM Loved yours! Congrats on the win. Beautiful Scars December 27, 2015 at 6:34 PM Thank you Andrea :)-*smiles*

Michael Tor December 27, 2015 at 11:10 AM Laura congratulations on this steamy write of Paradise. Congratulations! Beautiful Scars December 27, 2015 at 11:30 AM Thank you Michael very much! You are always so sweet :) *hugs*

Paul Callus December 27, 2015 at 3:42 AM I love this romantic acrostic, Laura, especially that final line which you must have written with a smile on your face! Congratulations a most worthy win:) Regards // paul Beautiful Scars December 27, 2015 at 11:28 AM Paul, many thanks! You are always so kind :) *smiles*

John Hamilton December 27, 2015 at 12:25 AM Congrats Laura on your placement in my contest! Very nice! Beautiful Scars December 27, 2015 at 11:28 AM Many thanks John! I love Acrostics! -Laura

Funom Makama December 24, 2015 at 6:46 AM This is lovely. Wishing you a wonderful christmas season and a fulfilling new year. Beautiful Scars December 24, 2015 at 9:19 AM Thank you Funom for your kind words...:)

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2015 at 8:31 PM ooh, as the door closes. GREAT ending on this romantic one. Laura. Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 8:57 PM Thank you Andrea! :)

Jan Allison December 20, 2015 at 3:06 PM Sounds like paradise to me LuLoo:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 3:30 PM Thank you kind lady :)-luloo

Eve Roper December 20, 2015 at 2:44 PM I love your poem, Laura, and I am not sugar coding it, good Acrostic! Hugs Eve Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 3:28 PM You're too cute Eve! Many thanks :)