Paradise

he touches her face
looking into her green  eyes
seeing  fear within
smiles and holding her cold hand
he leads her to Paradise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bunch Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 9:24 PM
I tried a different approach and came upon this jewel. Nice short poem with few words, but a lot of power.
Roberts Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 9:41 AM
How did you miss this one?..Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 10:55 AM
wowe what a crime and all those hits for so few comments that is bad form on those reading , this is superb sweetie xx
Roberts Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 5:36 PM
makes me wonder Mandy 959 read it and about 4 comments before yours.
Williams Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 12:07 PM
Seren now I love this, very romantic indeed...David
Roberts Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 12:49 PM
Thanks David
West Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 10:26 PM
hi Seren, outstanding, my kind of Tanka, brilliant. Rollo
Roberts Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 10:36 PM
Awwww romantic Rollo I knew I could rely on you to comment......Seren
Sivey Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 8:24 PM
This is definitely an extremely beautiful write, very beautiful my friend! I truly loved reading this incredible and amazing poem this evening! What a powerful and harmonious piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 9:21 PM
Thank you Russell......Seren
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