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Paradise

pristine beach and sky


          swaying hips and swaying palms


                    perfect paradise

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 5 in Sweetheart of Poetry Soup "Tropical Treasures" Contest - July 2010

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Jimmy Anderson Date: 7/13/2010 3:17:00 PM Congrats on your win in the "Sweetheart's" Contest, Robert! And thnx for the comments on mine. Always appreciated, my friend. Later, JA Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/12/2010 11:10:00 AM Congratulations Robert on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/11/2010 9:05:00 PM Congrats on the 5th place win, Bob Login to Reply

Destiny Orschell Date: 7/11/2010 6:56:00 PM Congradulations on your win. It's an amazing poem. I've never been able to manage a haiku, so I admire everyone who can. Great job. Loves Destiny Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/11/2010 12:58:00 PM You done good, Bob! Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Amy Green Date: 7/11/2010 12:46:00 PM Swaying hips and swaying palms- NICE! Enjoyed this one :) Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 7/11/2010 12:41:00 PM congratulations on your 5th place. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/11/2010 11:20:00 AM nice description,, love the sight of this one it's a bit relaxful,, enjoyed your write and good luck on the contest..P.D. Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 7/11/2010 10:02:00 AM Excellent word picture. Awesome write, Bob. Congrats on the win. Ralphie Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/11/2010 9:55:00 AM Just beautiful, Robert. Congratulations! Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 7/11/2010 9:53:00 AM Congratulations, Robert. On your poem's success, friend. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/11/2010 9:06:00 AM Congrats Bob on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this beautiful write so perfect from the vacation photos captured... thankxxx for supporting my contest.. with luv. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/11/2010 5:53:00 AM Nice humorous images. Good luck in the contest, Bob Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 7/11/2010 12:29:00 AM Fantastic entry for the contest Bob, all the best, Wilma Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/10/2010 7:46:00 PM Thankxxx for supporting my contest Bob.. with this awesome Haiku.. with luv.. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/10/2010 6:55:00 PM It sounds like a dream come true, Bob! Really like the "swaying hips and swaying palms." Recalls great walks along the shore. Great entry for the contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply