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Paradise

pristine beach and sky swaying hips and swaying palms perfect paradise Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 5 in Sweetheart of Poetry Soup "Tropical Treasures" Contest - July 2010

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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 7/13/2010 3:17:00 PM

Congrats on your win in the "Sweetheart's" Contest, Robert! And thnx for the comments on mine. Always appreciated, my friend. Later, JA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations Robert on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 9:05:00 PM

Congrats on the 5th place win, Bob

Destiny Orschell

Date: 7/11/2010 6:56:00 PM

Congradulations on your win. It's an amazing poem. I've never been able to manage a haiku, so I admire everyone who can. Great job. Loves Destiny

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 12:58:00 PM

You done good, Bob! Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn

Amy Green

Date: 7/11/2010 12:46:00 PM

Swaying hips and swaying palms- NICE! Enjoyed this one :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/11/2010 12:41:00 PM

congratulations on your 5th place. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2010 11:20:00 AM

nice description,, love the sight of this one it's a bit relaxful,, enjoyed your write and good luck on the contest..P.D.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/11/2010 10:02:00 AM

Excellent word picture. Awesome write, Bob. Congrats on the win. Ralphie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2010 9:55:00 AM

Just beautiful, Robert. Congratulations!

John Freeman

Date: 7/11/2010 9:53:00 AM

Congratulations, Robert. On your poem's success, friend. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2010 9:06:00 AM

Congrats Bob on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this beautiful write so perfect from the vacation photos captured... thankxxx for supporting my contest.. with luv.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 5:53:00 AM

Nice humorous images. Good luck in the contest, Bob

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/11/2010 12:29:00 AM

Fantastic entry for the contest Bob, all the best, Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/10/2010 7:46:00 PM

Thankxxx for supporting my contest Bob.. with this awesome Haiku.. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/10/2010 6:55:00 PM

It sounds like a dream come true, Bob! Really like the "swaying hips and swaying palms." Recalls great walks along the shore. Great entry for the contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn