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pristine beach and sky swaying hips and swaying palms perfect paradise Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 5 in Sweetheart of Poetry Soup "Tropical Treasures" Contest - July 2010

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Date: 7/13/2010 3:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the "Sweetheart's" Contest, Robert! And thnx for the comments on mine. Always appreciated, my friend. Later, JA
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Date: 7/12/2010 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations Robert on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:05:00 PM
Congrats on the 5th place win, Bob
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Date: 7/11/2010 6:56:00 PM
Congradulations on your win. It's an amazing poem. I've never been able to manage a haiku, so I admire everyone who can. Great job. Loves Destiny
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Date: 7/11/2010 12:58:00 PM
You done good, Bob! Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/11/2010 12:46:00 PM
Swaying hips and swaying palms- NICE! Enjoyed this one :)
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Date: 7/11/2010 12:41:00 PM
congratulations on your 5th place. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:20:00 AM
nice description,, love the sight of this one it's a bit relaxful,, enjoyed your write and good luck on the contest..P.D.
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:02:00 AM
Excellent word picture. Awesome write, Bob. Congrats on the win. Ralphie
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:55:00 AM
Just beautiful, Robert. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations, Robert. On your poem's success, friend. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:06:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this beautiful write so perfect from the vacation photos captured... thankxxx for supporting my contest.. with luv.
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:53:00 AM
Nice humorous images. Good luck in the contest, Bob
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Date: 7/11/2010 12:29:00 AM
Fantastic entry for the contest Bob, all the best, Wilma
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Date: 7/10/2010 7:46:00 PM
Thankxxx for supporting my contest Bob.. with this awesome Haiku.. with luv..
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Date: 7/10/2010 6:55:00 PM
It sounds like a dream come true, Bob! Really like the "swaying hips and swaying palms." Recalls great walks along the shore. Great entry for the contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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