Paradise

blanket 
of trust wrapped 
us warm 
in soft touch 
of love.

side by side  
we lay 
carefree smiles 
long night 

in same notes 
hearts beat 
together 

blend in 
harmony 

paradise.



17th May 2019
Charles Messina sponsored Charlieku contest 

The poem must be 15 lines long  and the syllabble count must be 23232,3232,323,23,3   Also, it must be 5 lines, 4 lines, 3 lines, 2 lines and 1 line
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Roper Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Beautiful verse, Debjani, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Messina Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 9:04 PM
So beautiful a write, Debjani. So touching! Congratulations on your win. ~Charlie
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May 25, 2019 at 1:39 PM
- Congratulations Debjani, on your great suggestions ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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May 18, 2019 at 4:42 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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May 17, 2019 at 7:57 PM
Not easy to do and yet you did it wonderfully, and it appears with some ease. Good luck in this contest!
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