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Parading Plumage

Pretty peacocks parade puffy plumage,
painted peach, pink, purple...
Patterns preview picturesque poses,
pleasing peahens' passion.
Peacocks' plumage presents protection,
potential predators pass promptly.

animalcolornaturealliteration

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Connie Marcum Wong

May 15, 2022 at 2:51 PM

A warm welcome to Poetry Soup. In joyed your excellent poem. I think you might enjoy writing a Pleiades. There are often contests here that use that form. Blessings Aloha, Connie

Theresa Lynn

May 17, 2022 at 1:46 PM

Thanks, I will give it a try!

Chinedum Ekwobi

May 14, 2022 at 2:02 AM

Who would have believed that a poet could conceive and exclusively P-dominated 5-line Alliterative Verse? Theresa Lynn Beyerl has done exactly while meaning to state that Appearance matters too. I too give credence to notion of Immunity from harm wrought by colorful appearance.

Theresa Lynn

May 17, 2022 at 1:47 PM

Thank you, it was challenging and exciting to accomplish!

Paul Callus

May 13, 2022 at 11:44 AM

A striking example of alliteration, Theresa. Well done! ~ Regards // paul

Theresa Lynn

May 17, 2022 at 1:47 PM

Thank you!

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 13, 2022 at 11:09 AM

Hello Theresa Beyer, So nice to meet you. Yes the peacock is beautiful when he spreads his tail feathers out. The colors are beautiful. I enjoyed this poem. Enjoy tyour day my friend.

Theresa Lynn

May 17, 2022 at 1:48 PM

Nice to meet you. Thank you!

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 13, 2022 at 11:09 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoy your day my friend.