JC Brul Poet Haiku

paperboat hiku

                           
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     creased with childhood smile
                  paper boat on old pavement
                              memories ripple

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Ghairo Daniels April 27, 2026 at 8:45 PM Wow JCB ! You are soo good with this format. Well done in Brian’s Contest. Sending blessings. X.

Valsa George April 27, 2026 at 2:24 AM Beautiful haiku and image. Congratulations Jez on your great win.

Kim Rodrigues April 27, 2026 at 2:03 AM Well done!

sara Etgen-Baker April 26, 2026 at 5:02 PM aww, this is so clever! I loved paper boats as a child.

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2026 at 2:42 PM This is extra nice . I see it's a win too. Well deserved. Thanks for your wonderful contest just judged

Jan Allison April 26, 2026 at 2:26 PM beautifully created and I love the picture with it JCB hugs jan xx

I Am Anaya April 26, 2026 at 12:48 PM Memoir's so warm, love the oragami feel. Congratulations on your win, JCB! Blessings

Silent One April 26, 2026 at 10:51 AM This is lovely and you designed it really well...

Laurentine G April 26, 2026 at 10:46 AM Wonderful idea and great delivery :)

Deb M April 26, 2026 at 7:04 AM Simple and just lovely JCB! Debx