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Richard Lamoureux

Paper Heart

I love how you dance
Pirouette across my page
Delicately take my hand
Glide into my soul
Gravity cannot hold you
Neither can this paper heart


For Dr. Rams Choka contest.

Copyright © Richard Lamoureux | Year Posted 2014

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Darlene Gifford

October 3, 2014 at 2:27 PM

A great image, Richard! Having a dancing heart, even for a little while is better than never having one at all! Reminds me of when I'm trying to write a poem and that perfect word flirting with my mind escapes me!

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 30, 2014 at 12:30 PM

Congratulations on your win Richard. I enjoyed reading this lovely poem again.

Richard Lamoureux

September 30, 2014 at 12:32 PM

Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your visit.

September 28, 2014 at 1:28 AM

enchanting the heart, rich.. cheers on your stunning win.. hugggs

September 28, 2014 at 12:57 AM

Congrats Richard,this stands out.

Andrea Dietrich

September 27, 2014 at 9:28 PM

I loved this from the first time I saw it. Congrats on your well deserved win, Richard.

September 27, 2014 at 4:03 PM

Perfect one Richard for Valentines day! Congrad's Light & Love

Abdul Malik Mandani

September 27, 2014 at 9:24 AM

Just one word is enough for this "Beautiful"

Richard Lamoureux

September 27, 2014 at 9:27 AM

Thanks Abdul.

Earl Schumacker

September 27, 2014 at 8:57 AM

Hi Richard, Very nice, well conceived, concise and on point choka. Congratulations on a solid win. Have a great day. Earl

Richard Lamoureux

September 27, 2014 at 9:05 AM

Thanks Earl.

September 27, 2014 at 8:46 AM

Beautiful, Richard...so light and lovely, congrats!

Richard Lamoureux

September 27, 2014 at 9:06 AM

Thanks Faye.

September 27, 2014 at 7:41 AM

Congratulations on your huge win Richard. I love this choka.

Richard Lamoureux

September 27, 2014 at 9:12 AM

Thanks Maurice.

September 27, 2014 at 6:09 AM

I'm impressed by the elegance of this lovely write, Richard. Congrats....a very much deserved win! // paul

Richard Lamoureux

September 27, 2014 at 6:36 AM

Thankyou Paul.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 27, 2014 at 4:40 AM

Elegant write n awesome win Richard! Congrats my friend!

Richard Lamoureux

September 27, 2014 at 6:35 AM

Thanks Upma.

September 27, 2014 at 2:01 AM

Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, RichaRD

Richard Lamoureux

September 27, 2014 at 6:34 AM

Thanks for picking my poem Dr. Ram.

September 25, 2014 at 2:48 AM

This one stayed with me like a fragrance that lingers, when you find yourself standing all alone in a room. Simply beautiful my friend. I had the pleasure of catching up on so many of your poems I have missed this month. Always such a joy! Hope you are smiling!

Richard Lamoureux

September 25, 2014 at 8:04 AM

Hello and a big hug to you sweet girl. Yes I am smiling.

Richard Lamoureux

September 25, 2014 at 8:03 AM

Andrea Dietrich

September 20, 2014 at 10:13 PM

oh ok, it was poem of the day. NOw that is GREAT news. It deserved it.

Andrea Dietrich

September 20, 2014 at 10:12 PM

This is really good, I like it even better than the other one! Why is Yanny giving you a congrats? Don't tell me this contest closed?? When I didn't post mine yet? YIKES

Richard Lamoureux

September 25, 2014 at 8:03 AM

Ha ha, you are okay! Thanks for the congrats and comments.

Yanny Widjanarko

September 19, 2014 at 10:05 AM

Ow well, this has already been chosen?? Wow! Congrats Rick :p

Yanny Widjanarko

September 19, 2014 at 10:12 AM

Hugs back Rick, lol :D

Richard Lamoureux

September 19, 2014 at 10:10 AM

Thanks and a big hug Yanny!

Yanny Widjanarko

September 19, 2014 at 10:04 AM

Aha.... Another interesting title with a lovely content :D loved it Rick!

September 19, 2014 at 6:34 AM

Richard, congratulations on your fine write being chosen as Poem of the day!!

Richard Lamoureux

September 19, 2014 at 8:12 AM

Good morning Robert, thanks.

Eileen Manassian

September 19, 2014 at 6:10 AM

Congrats, Richard. Lovely poem.

Richard Lamoureux

September 19, 2014 at 8:13 AM

Hi Eileen, are you back home? How was the trip?

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 18, 2014 at 9:03 PM

Brilliantly penned Richard. Congratulations on poem of the day.

Richard Lamoureux

September 19, 2014 at 8:15 AM

Thanks Brenda.

Charmaine Chircop

September 18, 2014 at 4:46 PM

Congrats. On the poem of the day feature.This beauty deserves it Richard!!

Richard Lamoureux

September 19, 2014 at 8:16 AM

You are sweet Charmaine.

September 18, 2014 at 1:44 PM

I think Maurice will agree, we should change this heading to " Canadian Poem of the Day " Like this even better the second time around!

Richard Lamoureux

September 19, 2014 at 8:17 AM

Ha ha, I like your thinking.

September 18, 2014 at 1:24 PM

Beautifully eloquent!

Richard Lamoureux

September 19, 2014 at 8:17 AM

Thanks Scott.

September 18, 2014 at 8:01 AM

wonderful to read this again and to see it awarded poem of the day Richard:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

September 18, 2014 at 9:23 AM

Hugs and thanks.

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