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Paper Heart

I love how you dance
Pirouette across my page
Delicately take my hand
Glide into my soul
Gravity cannot hold you
Neither can this paper heart


For Dr. Rams Choka contest.

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 10/3/2014 2:27:00 PM

A great image, Richard! Having a dancing heart, even for a little while is better than never having one at all! Reminds me of when I'm trying to write a poem and that perfect word flirting with my mind escapes me!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/30/2014 12:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Richard. I enjoyed reading this lovely poem again.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2014 12:32:00 PM

Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your visit.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2014 1:28:00 AM

enchanting the heart, rich.. cheers on your stunning win.. hugggs

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 9/28/2014 12:57:00 AM

Congrats Richard,this stands out.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 9:28:00 PM

I loved this from the first time I saw it. Congrats on your well deserved win, Richard.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/27/2014 4:03:00 PM

Perfect one Richard for Valentines day! Congrad's Light & Love

Abdul Malik

Date: 9/27/2014 9:24:00 AM

Just one word is enough for this "Beautiful"

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2014 9:27:00 AM

Thanks Abdul.

Earl Schumacker

Date: 9/27/2014 8:57:00 AM

Hi Richard, Very nice, well conceived, concise and on point choka. Congratulations on a solid win. Have a great day. Earl

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2014 9:05:00 AM

Thanks Earl.

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/27/2014 8:46:00 AM

Beautiful, Richard...so light and lovely, congrats!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2014 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Faye.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your huge win Richard. I love this choka.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2014 9:12:00 AM

Thanks Maurice.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/27/2014 6:09:00 AM

I'm impressed by the elegance of this lovely write, Richard. Congrats....a very much deserved win! // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2014 6:36:00 AM

Thankyou Paul.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/27/2014 4:40:00 AM

Elegant write n awesome win Richard! Congrats my friend!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2014 6:35:00 AM

Thanks Upma.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/27/2014 2:01:00 AM

Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, RichaRD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/27/2014 6:34:00 AM

Thanks for picking my poem Dr. Ram.

Sarai Virden

Date: 9/25/2014 2:48:00 AM

This one stayed with me like a fragrance that lingers, when you find yourself standing all alone in a room. Simply beautiful my friend. I had the pleasure of catching up on so many of your poems I have missed this month. Always such a joy! Hope you are smiling!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/25/2014 8:04:00 AM

Hello and a big hug to you sweet girl. Yes I am smiling.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/25/2014 8:03:00 AM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2014 10:13:00 PM

oh ok, it was poem of the day. NOw that is GREAT news. It deserved it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2014 10:12:00 PM

This is really good, I like it even better than the other one! Why is Yanny giving you a congrats? Don't tell me this contest closed?? When I didn't post mine yet? YIKES

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/25/2014 8:03:00 AM

Ha ha, you are okay! Thanks for the congrats and comments.