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When you surrender to love, passion erupts into flame. And desire won't be ignored, despite fear of pain or shame. A screwed-up reality isn't easy to understand. But you're willing to gamble; blind to what fate holds in hand. Following feelings of bliss, you chase love's elusive spark. And yet, in fantasy's realm, innocence feeds off the dark. The feeling of betrayal devastates a trusting heart. And white lies, stripped of luster, tear your paper dreams apart. Sometimes, love seems to offer more to reject than embrace. But then, hope carries you off to another, better place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/12/2018 10:47:00 PM
Lovely, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Line, for all of your continued support. Emile.
Date: 2/2/2015 4:41:00 PM
Beautiful...ever so beautiful. Lovely, Emile. So true.
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Date: 2/2/2015 4:56:00 PM
Ah Eileen, you make me smile once more, thanks. Emile.
Date: 2/2/2015 4:18:00 PM
Love the ending...hope carries your heart to a better place......Tim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/2/2015 4:55:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/2/2015 1:36:00 PM
powerfully written Emile:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/2/2015 1:52:00 PM
Thanks Jan, your input is always so supportive. Emile.
Date: 2/2/2015 1:13:00 PM
Liked this one pal,vey nice.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/2/2015 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Karl, I appreciate your kind words. Emile.
Date: 2/2/2015 12:50:00 PM
Powerful pen here Emile! I truly enjoyed reading about on of my very favorite subjects and that's about: love. Yes, many can relate to things written in you poem, my dear friend. Betrayal is very painful and sad when it happens, but it goes around a lot. A 7 from me! Have a lovely day! :) love n hugs! xxxxx D.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/2/2015 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Dorian, you have been one of my biggest supporters and I do appreciate it. Emile.

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