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Paper Clouds

~Flying free above the still sea where ideas drift onto~
                                                    paper clouds where the
                                                                    ink
                                                                  pours
                                                                    like
                                                                   cool
                                                                 ~rain~

                                                               by Michael

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2012

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Shaz Cheesman Date: 10/16/2012 12:11:00 AM Oh very interesting, imaginative and creative - well done - Shaz Login to Reply

Omneya Kamal Date: 10/14/2012 2:46:00 PM Wow Micheal! this is very creative! makes me curious to check out more of your writings! :) keep it up! Omneya Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 10/14/2012 12:29:00 PM love this one...short but with great depth! Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/10/2012 11:05:00 AM Looks like a plane flying in the air. Love the uniqueness of the shape of your poems. Excellent Micheal. love phyl Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/9/2012 4:29:00 PM fantastic one Michael luv .. u r flying high today with quality lines and outstanding imagery .. a rare gem from my WK ..JG so luvs .. xoxo yes let me know when talk soon time is luv .. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 9/9/2012 9:00:00 AM Lovely..BG Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/8/2012 3:15:00 PM I have a paper umbrella ~ luv~Skat Login to Reply Skat A Date: 9/8/2012 3:17:00 PM Shame on me' your not on my list.. 4give me Skat A Date: 9/8/2012 3:16:00 PM Looking 4 all my favorite poets today

Russell Sivey Date: 9/8/2012 1:39:00 PM I like the graphical interpretation you put onto this write! I really enjoyed the meaning of this poem, the deepness that it contains within my friend! What a fantastic write, awesome piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/8/2012 11:54:00 AM Yes, they are gorgeous - they have completely blown across the sea to me. :) Have a peaceful weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply