Michael J. Falotico Poet Free verse

Paper Clouds

~Flying free above the still sea where ideas drift onto~
                                                    paper clouds where the
                                                                    ink
                                                                  pours
                                                                    like
                                                                   cool
                                                                 ~rain~

                                                               by Michael

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Shaz Cheesman October 16, 2012 at 12:11 AM Oh very interesting, imaginative and creative - well done - Shaz

Omneya Kamal October 14, 2012 at 2:46 PM Wow Micheal! this is very creative! makes me curious to check out more of your writings! :) keep it up! Omneya

Sandra Adams October 14, 2012 at 12:29 PM love this one...short but with great depth!

Phyllis Babcock September 10, 2012 at 11:05 AM Looks like a plane flying in the air. Love the uniqueness of the shape of your poems. Excellent Micheal. love phyl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 9, 2012 at 4:29 PM fantastic one Michael luv .. u r flying high today with quality lines and outstanding imagery .. a rare gem from my WK ..JG so luvs .. xoxo yes let me know when talk soon time is luv ..

Barbara Gorelick September 9, 2012 at 9:00 AM Lovely..BG

Skat A September 8, 2012 at 3:15 PM I have a paper umbrella ~ luv~Skat Skat A September 8, 2012 at 3:17 PM Shame on me' your not on my list.. 4give me Skat A September 8, 2012 at 3:16 PM Looking 4 all my favorite poets today

Russell Sivey September 8, 2012 at 1:39 PM I like the graphical interpretation you put onto this write! I really enjoyed the meaning of this poem, the deepness that it contains within my friend! What a fantastic write, awesome piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2012 at 11:54 AM Yes, they are gorgeous - they have completely blown across the sea to me. :) Have a peaceful weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)