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he carries his wooden boat out onto the sea like he often does. This little boy thrilled, utters charm lulling words; in his mind, his boat transforms to ride an adventurous voyage on the boundless rolling sea 5/15/2020
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Date: 5/19/2020 6:20:00 AM
Beautiful and witty. Words of gracious flow, developing extra limbs to double-embrace the mind.
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Date: 5/16/2020 8:21:00 AM
you captured my childhood perfectly
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Date: 5/16/2020 3:05:00 AM
Nice one Eve..
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