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Paper Boats

he carries his wooden boat out onto the sea like he often does. This little boy thrilled, utters charm lulling words; in his mind, his boat transforms to ride an adventurous voyage on the boundless rolling sea 5/15/2020
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Makama Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 6:20 AM
Beautiful and witty. Words of gracious flow, developing extra limbs to double-embrace the mind.
Parker Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 8:21 AM
you captured my childhood perfectly
Somadas Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 3:05 AM
Nice one Eve..
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