Paper Boat

paper boat--
how far will it carry
my child's smile






© kash poet (kashinath karmakar)


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Andrea Dietrich

April 18, 2020 at 2:20 PM

back to let you know, this is your THIRD most popular poem at Soup!! I'll always love this one. Do you think you could start posting up poems and be here permanently again. I miss the good old days!

Tim Peterson

April 8, 2018 at 10:01 PM

Wonderful

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

October 7, 2014 at 11:00 AM

This sure is a beauty, kash! I really enjoyed the thought you put in here, of how long that paper boat can give happiness to your child... And I hear you are getting all these awards for your haiku, I'm really happy for you! Congrats for all your accomplishments! Also want to greet you happy happy birthday! Enjoy your day and God bless you! :)

Surishiva Kumar

July 8, 2014 at 2:22 PM

Hello Kash I am new to this place. I love Haiku. I have published my first Haiku here under the title 'Pareidolia'. Please see when time permits and offer your valuable comments. Paper boat has a tonne of sentiments loaded in it.

Kim Merryman

June 25, 2013 at 1:59 PM

I love this, Kash! Great haiku! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

John Posey

June 25, 2013 at 10:43 AM

Kash, you touched the heart of every parent with you winning haiku entry.... I'd say paper boats are buoyant into eternity. Congratulations, my friend.... Jake

Connie Gildersleeve

June 25, 2013 at 6:47 AM

Hardens my childhood memories. Kash congratulations on your fine Haiku. A well deserve win my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie

Ilene Bauer

June 24, 2013 at 8:13 PM

love it! congrats on a well-deserved win!

Andrea Dietrich

September 12, 2012 at 8:56 PM

just dropping by for a quick hello. Hope you find some time to write, Kashinath!!

Gail Debole

August 25, 2012 at 6:55 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Jack Horne

August 24, 2012 at 2:46 PM

beautiful haiku, Kash. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Gwendolen Song

August 24, 2012 at 7:33 AM

....as far as his vision can reach, Kash....how relaxing, this park setting write! :) gwendolen

Modupe Sefunmi

August 24, 2012 at 4:27 AM

Congratulations on your win Kash!

Poet Destroyer A

August 23, 2012 at 9:18 PM

KASH, congratulations with your awesome win... always~ pd

Joyce Johnson

August 22, 2012 at 11:05 AM

A beautiful win. Stopping by to say thank you again and I have posted my corrected version. Love, Joyce

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

August 21, 2012 at 8:20 PM

Congrats on your first place win, Kash! This is a precious haiku. I love it and I love the new avatar. What an adorable pout! Love and Blessings, Rhonda