Paper Boat

Paper boat travelled through the streets of paper town.. Street lights were lit.. a breezy wind followed.. saw the newly wed couple dreamt of their future and night.. heard someone played the ever melodious violin.. as the notes get farther...slowly the paper boat sank deeper..

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/20/2022 5:27:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Shwetha Sb
Date: 4/21/2022 12:15:00 AM

Thank u so much for the warm welcome.Im really grateful.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/19/2022 8:34:00 AM

Shwetha SB, Fine paper indeed, fine notes and musings in violin's christening of a Paper boat. -Richard

Shwetha Sb
Date: 4/20/2022 12:50:00 AM

Thanks so much for the read.