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Paper Boat

Engineered to sail far across Duck Pond's great beyond, Daddy built my marine dream. Through Seven Splashes she swayed, calmed by swan songs and toad croaks, lilly pads and locus blooms when paper had strength of steel. 5-16-2020

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Date: 5/20/2020 6:34:00 PM
wow, I LOVE this. I am thinking this one required either 7 word or 7 syllables per line. Anyway, it is free verse after all and it's very delightful.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/20/2020 8:25:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea for enjoying it. I didn't realize that one of my lines had 8 syllables. Thanks for pointing that out. I just changed it.