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Pantoum Tribute To Milton


Wish I had known you better- friend;
my time is limited on Soup.
With writing only- I attend;
But, now I share this with your group.

My time is limited on Soup.
With your last theme- could not compose.
But, now I share this with your group
using a special form you chose.

With your last theme- could not compose.
Now, such great poems, I have read-
using a special form you chose,
I see the beauty your words spread. 

Now, such great poems, I have read; 
you shared your kind and gentle heart. 
I see the beauty your words spread-
so unexpected- you did part.

You shared your kind and gentle heart;
With writing only, I attend.
So unexpected- you did part;
wish I had known you better- friend.


January 3, 2023

Contest: In Honor Of Milt- 
An Un-Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich 

 I missed writing for Milt's last contest:
"Pantoum On Writing Poetry" - 5 Stanzas
 But, I wrote it now as a tribute to him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 1:54 PM
that was such a nice idea, doing his unfinished contest using your own pantoum for him. I will never know if he would have liked my pantoum as a winner. He surely would have loved this one.
Daniel Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Well written, Sandra, he will be missed sorely:)
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