Notes About The Poem

To those who were curious, this poem is the attenuated version (to fit within contest requirements) of 'Panther's Roar'. laf

Panther


Have you heard the Panther’s roar?	
A sickly sweet odor.
He traps his prey in his paws,
devours them with beastly jaws. 

Have you heard the Panther’s roar?
Three torpid days, he’ll snore.
Appetite he can’t sate. 
Constant hunger is his fate.

Have you heard the Panther’s roar?
He requires so much more.
Dragon eludes him despite his feat. 
He’ll never taste the other white meat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dutta Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 9:54 PM
BIG CONGRATS LINDA to win. Love
Fowler Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 6:42 AM
Many thanks Anisha! Linda
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October 23, 2020 at 4:07 PM
Read the full poem Linda, it’s wonderful.Congratulations on your win, it’s well deserved. Belle
Fowler Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 4:08 PM
Thank you Belle. Linda
Agustin Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 2:20 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, awaking me with your arresting question. God bless you
Fowler Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 6:33 AM
Thanks Beata. I enjoy your visits! Linda
Watt Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 10:39 PM
Love your line about the other white meat! This was so clever and an enjoyable read, Linda. Congratulations on your well deserved win ~ John
Fowler Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 6:32 AM
Hey John. You're the first to mention that line. :) Many thanks for the congrats! Linda
Kauffman Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 9:27 PM
Linda, very well done. Congratulations with your vivid imagery. I like the way you started each stanza with "Have you heard the Panther's roar?" Kudos!
Fowler Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 6:30 AM
Many thanks Sam. A fun contest :) Linda
Mcintosh Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:13 PM
Congrats on your top winner :) God bless you always :)
Fowler Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:27 PM
Many thanks Gina. Hugs {} Linda
Logan Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:12 PM
Congratulations on your Panther win, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:26 PM
Thank you Jenna! :) Linda
Krutsinger Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 1:21 PM
I feel like I have heard the panther's roar now, and I have you to thank. I just hope I can sleep tonight.
Fowler Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 3:44 PM
Teehee! Thanks Caren! Sweet dreams, ;) Linda
Rose  Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Each beast has its prey meal heh, nicely written
Fowler Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 8:38 AM
So many thanks for the stop-by and kind words. {} Linda
Daniel Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 11:36 PM
Very nicely done, Linda:)
Fowler Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 6:06 AM
Many thanks Jo. {} Linda
Mcintosh Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 7:22 PM
Best for the contest :) Panthers are amazing creatures for sure. God bless you and your poetic endeavors :)
Fowler Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 7:45 PM
Thank you sweet Gina. hugs {} Linda
Onclaud Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 6:38 PM
how impressive, linda...i find panthers mysterious and you captured them through this remarkable poem...thanks for coming by...huggs
Fowler Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 6:50 PM
Hi Nette. Thanks for the visit and kind words. Linda
Buehler Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 8:49 PM
This poem on the legendary creature is so well described and beautiful. It also has a pleasing rhyme. :)
Fowler Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 5:50 AM
Hello Evelyn. Thank you for the supportive words! Linda
Tor Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 6:09 PM
I can hear them roaring.
Fowler Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 3:13 PM
Thanks Michael! Roars, Linda
Fenn Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 11:10 AM
Wow! Creative!
Fowler Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 2:59 PM
Thank you Jennifer! Linda
One Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 7:15 AM
Love panthers and you described it very well...
Fowler Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 8:23 AM
Many thanks for the visit and kind words. :) Linda
Buhagiar Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 11:16 PM
Loved the details. Panthers are very ferocious. ~~
Fowler Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Hello Victor. Thank ou for the visit and always for your kind words. :) Linda
Wolf Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 7:23 PM
Very fine penning, Linda. Looks like a winner in the contest to me... By the way: If called by a panther, don't anther. (That's courtesy of Ogden Nash). Smiles, Gershon
Fowler Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Ha gw! I always appreciate your witty and encouraging comments. :) Linda
Canerdy Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 6:39 PM
Descriptive, well-written piece, Linda. Janice
Fowler Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 6:42 PM
Thank you Janice. hugs {} Linda
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October 13, 2020 at 4:27 PM
Love the write Linda, (would have liked to read the two verses that you removed) superb content and great rhythmical beat. Belle
Fowler Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 4:38 PM
Thank you Belle. I really hated to delete them, but wanted to meet requirements for the contest. Once the contest is judged, I will re-insert the two and notify you of the update. :)
Watson Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 2:03 PM
I enjoyed reading this, Linda and love the repetition of the first line which draws our attention to the most important fact about the myth. If it's for the contest, I believe that Julia asked for a maximum of 12 lines but do check with her. Each verse stands in its own right luckily.
Fowler Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 2:29 PM
Thank you Wendy! I removed two stanzas. It still makes sense (I think). Fun to write anyway :) Linda
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