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Panpoetics

If you knew my mind
   You would fear me
If you knew my past 
   You would stone me
If you knew my heart
   You would love me


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John Hamilton

May 29, 2020 at 9:54 AM

This one touches the heart in all the right places, enjoyed. Please Mo we want mo!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 29, 2020 at 4:51 PM

Thank you so much John! You warm my heart :))) xomo

Dave Cox

May 15, 2020 at 9:54 AM

I like this. Brilliant. The truth behind every pair of eyes. Dave

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 15, 2020 at 12:25 PM

A poem for a poem, beautifully said Dave. Thank you. ~mo

Paul Callus

May 14, 2020 at 8:57 AM

Short, but says a lot in three powerful statements, Maureen! (!) No woman should be feared if treated well (2) let those without sin throw the first stones (3) All people are born to be loved :) ~ Regards // paul

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 14, 2020 at 9:07 AM

You warm my heart, thank you Paul. Have a wonderful day! xomo

Gershon Wolf

May 6, 2020 at 10:57 PM

One out of three ain't bad! :) gw

Gershon Wolf

May 31, 2020 at 3:04 PM

Meatloaf I'll pass on... But I know your heart, and that's all I need to know. You are a dear! Blessings, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 7, 2020 at 7:40 AM

A side of Meatloaf for breakfast, delish' <3 Thank you my friend, xomo!

Timothy Hicks

May 6, 2020 at 7:03 PM

.... and if we knew your natural hair color we'd say, "Ahhh ... now I see" ;) But really though ... this is a fine statement to put on one's grave. Packs a punch in a few simple (yet carefully selected) statements. As a side note your hair color is pretty rad to be honest (orange is my favorite color) ...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 6, 2020 at 7:32 PM

Orange a standard go to for me, love it. I'm pretty proud of that flame job. I think I took the clippers to it and dyed it blue a couple days after that photo was taken. I've recently shaved off purple, excited to see how much grey I'm getting...

Panagiota Romios

May 6, 2020 at 10:39 AM

How delightfully your mind and pen flow, Panagiota xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 6, 2020 at 11:51 AM

Thank you for saying that Panagiota; I have an injured brain and have been literally working very hard to get my mind flowing, I am delighted, and then some that it is turning over ;), xomo

Anil Deo

May 6, 2020 at 7:47 AM

I know your words, and I adore you! (But Jesus did have to work on my heart, mind, ... everything, LOL!) shalom Sis.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 6, 2020 at 8:40 AM

Thank you my friend! I may not practice anything organized, but he played a huge part in forging my heart. xomo!

John Lawless

May 6, 2020 at 7:24 AM

If identity thieves got the whole package they'd return it quickly. Nice one Mo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 6, 2020 at 8:39 AM

Yah. ;), thank you John! xomo

Caren Krutsinger

May 6, 2020 at 6:30 AM

This is HILARIOUS! Love every inch of it my friend!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 6, 2020 at 8:38 AM

Tee hee! Thank you! For you the squishiest hugs virtual reality will afford <------O------->

CayCay Godwin

May 5, 2020 at 9:12 PM

This is brevity stunningly dripping dramatic!!!! Truly it is. I answered you on Rico's page but not sure you'll see it in your in box so I'm here to tell you I left an inappropriate comment there for you. All of which led me to this gem of yours! It's all good! CayCay

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 6, 2020 at 8:36 AM

Thank you CayCay, I am sure that Rico will be amused. Thank you again ~x

Ilene Bauer

May 5, 2020 at 6:44 PM

this is fantastic, maureen! it's amazing how much is packed into these few words...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 5, 2020 at 8:09 PM

Thank you! I did put a lot of emotion into it, still I didn't think that would translate, but apparently it did. xomo!

Rico Leffanta

May 5, 2020 at 2:28 PM

Yesterday was your future - Tomorrow will be your past - Today that golden moment - The gods decreed would last! - - - GO FOR IT! Aloha! Rico

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 5, 2020 at 3:42 PM

Stay Gold Ponyboy <3

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 5, 2020 at 12:23 PM

Hello Maureen, to bad the other person can not figure us out. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 5, 2020 at 6:30 PM

Maureen, Enjoy your evening my friend.Hugs Darlene xxx-oo.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 5, 2020 at 3:43 PM

Agreed Darlene, casting judgement is a bad habit many do not know they have. Take care my friend, xomo

Jan Allison

May 5, 2020 at 11:00 AM

a poem we can all relate to Mo - great ink:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 5, 2020 at 12:02 PM

Thank you Jan, I am a little shocked at the response to this piece, hugs back! xomo

Anna Hopper

May 5, 2020 at 10:51 AM

I do love you! I can totally relate. If people only knew what was going on in my mind. Love this so much! Fav!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 5, 2020 at 12:01 PM

Thank you lovely! Thank GAWD no one can read minds, my face is loud enough sometimes ;), Hugs! xomo

Judy Ball

May 5, 2020 at 9:39 AM

Excellent Maureen. Love it. My thoughts precisely. Going into my faves. God Bless, JB

Judy Ball

May 5, 2020 at 9:37 AM

Excellent Maureen. Love it. My thoughts precisely. My husband THINKS he knows my mind and he is afraid, very afraid. lol Too bad he doesn't know my heart. Great job. God Bless, JB

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 5, 2020 at 11:59 AM

You made me giggle out loud with that Judy! Is there an"ex" in front of that "husband" ;), Don't answer that <3 Hugs, and thank you for the fave! Bless you too, xomo