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If you knew my mind You would fear me If you knew my past You would stone me If you knew my heart You would love me ***

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Date: 5/29/2020 9:54:00 AM
This one touches the heart in all the right places, enjoyed. Please Mo we want mo!!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/29/2020 4:51:00 PM
Thank you so much John! You warm my heart :))) xomo
Date: 5/15/2020 9:54:00 AM
I like this. Brilliant. The truth behind every pair of eyes. Dave
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/15/2020 12:25:00 PM
A poem for a poem, beautifully said Dave. Thank you. ~mo
Date: 5/14/2020 8:57:00 AM
Short, but says a lot in three powerful statements, Maureen! (!) No woman should be feared if treated well (2) let those without sin throw the first stones (3) All people are born to be loved :) ~ Regards // paul
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/14/2020 9:07:00 AM
You warm my heart, thank you Paul. Have a wonderful day! xomo
Date: 5/6/2020 10:57:00 PM
One out of three ain't bad! :) gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/31/2020 3:04:00 PM
Meatloaf I'll pass on... But I know your heart, and that's all I need to know. You are a dear! Blessings, Gershon
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/7/2020 7:40:00 AM
A side of Meatloaf for breakfast, delish' <3 Thank you my friend, xomo!
Date: 5/6/2020 7:03:00 PM
.... and if we knew your natural hair color we'd say, "Ahhh ... now I see" ;) But really though ... this is a fine statement to put on one's grave. Packs a punch in a few simple (yet carefully selected) statements. As a side note your hair color is pretty rad to be honest (orange is my favorite color) ...
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/6/2020 7:32:00 PM
Orange a standard go to for me, love it. I'm pretty proud of that flame job. I think I took the clippers to it and dyed it blue a couple days after that photo was taken. I've recently shaved off purple, excited to see how much grey I'm getting...
Date: 5/6/2020 10:39:00 AM
How delightfully your mind and pen flow, Panagiota xx
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/6/2020 11:51:00 AM
Thank you for saying that Panagiota; I have an injured brain and have been literally working very hard to get my mind flowing, I am delighted, and then some that it is turning over ;), xomo
Date: 5/6/2020 7:47:00 AM
I know your words, and I adore you! (But Jesus did have to work on my heart, mind, ... everything, LOL!) shalom Sis.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/6/2020 8:40:00 AM
Thank you my friend! I may not practice anything organized, but he played a huge part in forging my heart. xomo!
Date: 5/6/2020 7:24:00 AM
If identity thieves got the whole package they'd return it quickly. Nice one Mo
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/6/2020 8:39:00 AM
Yah. ;), thank you John! xomo
Date: 5/6/2020 6:30:00 AM
This is HILARIOUS! Love every inch of it my friend!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/6/2020 8:38:00 AM
Tee hee! Thank you! For you the squishiest hugs virtual reality will afford <------O------->
Date: 5/5/2020 9:12:00 PM
This is brevity stunningly dripping dramatic!!!! Truly it is. I answered you on Rico's page but not sure you'll see it in your in box so I'm here to tell you I left an inappropriate comment there for you. All of which led me to this gem of yours! It's all good! CayCay
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/6/2020 8:36:00 AM
Thank you CayCay, I am sure that Rico will be amused. Thank you again ~x
Date: 5/5/2020 6:44:00 PM
this is fantastic, maureen! it's amazing how much is packed into these few words...
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/5/2020 8:09:00 PM
Thank you! I did put a lot of emotion into it, still I didn't think that would translate, but apparently it did. xomo!
Date: 5/5/2020 2:28:00 PM
Yesterday was your future - Tomorrow will be your past - Today that golden moment - The gods decreed would last! - - - GO FOR IT! Aloha! Rico
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/5/2020 3:42:00 PM
Stay Gold Ponyboy <3
Date: 5/5/2020 12:23:00 PM
Hello Maureen, to bad the other person can not figure us out. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/5/2020 6:30:00 PM
Maureen, Enjoy your evening my friend.Hugs Darlene xxx-oo.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/5/2020 3:43:00 PM
Agreed Darlene, casting judgement is a bad habit many do not know they have. Take care my friend, xomo
Date: 5/5/2020 11:00:00 AM
a poem we can all relate to Mo - great ink:-) hugs Jan xx
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/5/2020 12:02:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I am a little shocked at the response to this piece, hugs back! xomo
Date: 5/5/2020 10:51:00 AM
I do love you! I can totally relate. If people only knew what was going on in my mind. Love this so much! Fav!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/5/2020 12:01:00 PM
Thank you lovely! Thank GAWD no one can read minds, my face is loud enough sometimes ;), Hugs! xomo
Date: 5/5/2020 9:39:00 AM
Excellent Maureen. Love it. My thoughts precisely. Going into my faves. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/5/2020 9:37:00 AM
Excellent Maureen. Love it. My thoughts precisely. My husband THINKS he knows my mind and he is afraid, very afraid. lol Too bad he doesn't know my heart. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/5/2020 11:59:00 AM
You made me giggle out loud with that Judy! Is there an"ex" in front of that "husband" ;), Don't answer that <3 Hugs, and thank you for the fave! Bless you too, xomo
Date: 5/5/2020 8:56:00 AM
Love this!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/5/2020 9:10:00 AM
Thank you for seeing my heart Kim, forever grateful, xomo <3
Date: 5/5/2020 8:53:00 AM
Maureen, We, the harshest in judgment of ourselves. Nature of the beast. You write with a keen spirit that rings true. -Richard
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/5/2020 9:08:00 AM
Richard, I know that more intimately than most; my beast's nature is my greatest struggle. Thank you so much, xomo <3