Panorama

The old man spoke with clearly grand drama,
“One rooster, four starlings—not a comma,
Two strange owls’ brigade,
One finch in cascade,
Built a nest in my beard—it’s a panorama!”

The original by Edward Lear:
There was an Old Man with a beard,
Who said, "It is just as I feared! --
Two Owls and a Hen, four Larks and a Wren,
Have all built their nests in my beard.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Godwin Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 7:52 AM
I bet you are a writer who truly enjoys penning limericks, there are a few here who find the form quite fulfilling and I think you are one. It blesses the rest of us because we get to be entertained by the results of limerick writer's efforts. Not my fav form, does come naturally to me, but I do enjoy reading them, this one is no exceptions, very good. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
George Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 1:21 AM
It is such a popular limerick. You have cleverly made a parody of it. I think these are your first limericks. I don't remember to have read any before. You can safely lay your hands on it.
Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 1:31 PM
I kind of remember that old man with a beard reference. Nice!
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 11:13 AM
- Yes, it was quite the panorama and a little drama in your beard, Jay :) - hugs
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