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Panic

All the sudden he thought, he’d gone blind He nearly went out of his mind. Then right away He knelt down to pray In hopes that his sight he might find. Then alas he started to pray Just as sudden the blindness went away He was quick to surmise His hat slipped over his eyes Kinda stupid - it’s needless to say!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/18/2010 10:36:00 AM
Lol this is funny, and sweet, and inna way still talks about faith. your poems arent boring, but are acutally quite entertaining ^^
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Date: 3/12/2010 8:26:00 PM
Very nicely put together Ralph and a jolt of smiles at the end line.. very sweet Limerick and enjoyed reading tonight.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/12/2010 4:53:00 PM
Good write, I enjoyed the laugh. This sounds like one of my senior moments. Caryl
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Date: 3/12/2010 2:39:00 PM
ha... i have those moments all the time:D... funny write
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Date: 3/12/2010 12:43:00 PM
Hope God has a sense of humor! lol
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:13:00 AM
Got a giggle out of that one.
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