Panic

All the sudden he thought, he’d gone blind
He nearly went out of his mind.
            Then right away 
             He knelt down to pray
In hopes that his sight he might find.

Then alas he started to pray
Just as sudden the blindness went away
             He was quick to surmise
             His hat slipped over his eyes
Kinda stupid - it’s needless to say!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loveless Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 10:36 AM
Lol this is funny, and sweet, and inna way still talks about faith. your poems arent boring, but are acutally quite entertaining ^^
Sweetheart Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 8:26 PM
Very nicely put together Ralph and a jolt of smiles at the end line.. very sweet Limerick and enjoyed reading tonight.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
Muzzey Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 4:53 PM
Good write, I enjoyed the laugh. This sounds like one of my senior moments. Caryl
Trevino Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 2:39 PM
ha... i have those moments all the time:D... funny write
Lacey Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Hope God has a sense of humor! lol
Palli Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 1:13 AM
Got a giggle out of that one.
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