Palm Sundae

A Milk Maid on McDonald's Farm
Incited a sense of alarm
Her grip on an udder
Made all the men shudder
And that was just part of her charm!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kiser Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 7:00 PM
Ow!
Leffanta Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 12:58 PM
Ow? Petroleum jelly soothes chaffed udders! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 5:27 PM
absolutely hilarious:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 8:34 PM
oh I did a "palm" limerick meself once. Love this one!!
Devonshire Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 4:13 PM
Hilarious, Rico! Can't blame the men for shuddering. Hugs, Carolyn
Leffanta Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Mahalo, Carloyn! Farm girls always try to find some fun in their chores! Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 4:30 PM
G'day Rico … the mind boggles - thanks Mate - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 4:46 PM
But milk maids are masters Down Under! Aloha! Rico
Bauer Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 1:21 PM
hilarious! you nailed this one, rico!
Leffanta Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 4:45 PM
Mahalo, Ilene! Aloha! Rico
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