Palm Reader

Palm reader I am not—
Yet if I did
Read hands imprinted,
Trace readable lines,
Tectonics
Of grip and release,
My own would be
A most alien surface—

This I have good sensed,
Reflected at the mirror
In honest light,
A countenance of surprise
To contrast my often image
Self so pervasive
A maestro of infinite deceptive batons—

What insidious behavior
These circumvents
Seldom admitted as lies…
In bald-faced defiance
To evidence of the heart,
An internal looking glass
Of immutable truths and consequences—

Oh my God
Forgive this sin
That I contrive You!
Of my own choosing
When to bless and rest,
And redefine or ignore….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 9, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Very original, I didn't see it coming, the direction of reflective self-truths. Much enjoyed.
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October 10, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Thank you, Paloma; this was so much fun to write. Have a beautiful day my friend!
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September 27, 2016 at 5:38 PM
Hi Joe, Your poem is beautiful but it is not a "Ghazal". Free verse may be....Poetry soup has a good example for this style of poetry....Pashang
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September 27, 2016 at 9:00 PM
For sure; I meant Free Verse; I did not check after I entered a form, not realizing the error. Please forgive me. The old eyes sometimes do not focus quickly as my mind. Thank you for pointing this out to me. Joe.
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September 19, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Wow this is a classic, and a well sent message to the so called palm readers who thinks they can redeem or doom the life of others.
DiMino Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Thank you very much, Miraj; so pleased you found the depth in this one. Blessings my friend!
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September 19, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Another good one, Joe, filled with great images..."internal looking glass of immutable truths..." Love it!
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September 19, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Thank you for the positive feedback and encouragement. Have a beautiful day!
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