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Palm Reader

Palm reader I am not— Yet if I did Read hands imprinted, Trace readable lines, Tectonics Of grip and release, My own would be A most alien surface— This I have good sensed, Reflected at the mirror In honest light, A countenance of surprise To contrast my often image Self so pervasive A maestro of infinite deceptive batons— What insidious behavior These circumvents Seldom admitted as lies… In bald-faced defiance To evidence of the heart, An internal looking glass Of immutable truths and consequences— Oh my God Forgive this sin That I contrive You! Of my own choosing When to bless and rest, And redefine or ignore….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/9/2016 3:35:00 PM
Very original, I didn't see it coming, the direction of reflective self-truths. Much enjoyed.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/10/2016 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, Paloma; this was so much fun to write. Have a beautiful day my friend!
Date: 9/27/2016 5:38:00 PM
Hi Joe, Your poem is beautiful but it is not a "Ghazal". Free verse may be....Poetry soup has a good example for this style of poetry....Pashang
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/27/2016 9:00:00 PM
For sure; I meant Free Verse; I did not check after I entered a form, not realizing the error. Please forgive me. The old eyes sometimes do not focus quickly as my mind. Thank you for pointing this out to me. Joe.
Date: 9/19/2016 10:17:00 AM
Wow this is a classic, and a well sent message to the so called palm readers who thinks they can redeem or doom the life of others.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/19/2016 9:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Miraj; so pleased you found the depth in this one. Blessings my friend!
Date: 9/19/2016 9:52:00 AM
Another good one, Joe, filled with great images..."internal looking glass of immutable truths..." Love it!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/19/2016 9:31:00 PM
Thank you for the positive feedback and encouragement. Have a beautiful day!

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