Palm Court

he palms the mountains
burnishing the pointed peaks
she groans with desire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 3:28 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
Anish Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 9:43 PM
Great erotica here! Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 8:54 PM
Congrats, Deb. it was good and hot.
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 7:16 PM
Debbie congratulations on your great win. Warm Smiles, Connie
A   Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 10:42 PM
nice win
Harper Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 10:38 PM
Debbie, a bit naughty, very evocative senryu, congratulations on your win!
Richards Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 11:18 AM
Still so hot to the touch!!! The smoke got my attention!!
Devnath  Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 10:43 AM
Congrats on your my friend in the contest with this lovely poem. Loved always, bl
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Debbie xx
Adeite Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 6:06 AM
Sensual indeed.
Wellington Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 11:18 PM
Hi Deb...it has been a long time, but the first poem I read on my return and I am again blown away by you the genius. Loving this charismatic sensual piece. One love JoyW
Kendrick Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 4:41 PM
Sensual one..If for a contest, it will surely win in my book..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I don't know when I will be able to get in there and do congrats..I am behind on everything..Sara
Richards Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 9:33 AM
Whew........!! love the title too !!! A senyru that sizzles! ps........many thanks, Deb, for my placement in your "tough" contest!! Cyndi is a STAR !!! Wow.....she knocked it out of the park !!!! Kuddos to her....and to you for getting the best out of her musings!
Tacito Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:42 PM
YES! All dates should go this way. :) Excellent!
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:23 AM
wow, a sexy one!!
Poet Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 3:19 PM
Hmmm...I like burnishing.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Hot, good one xx
Collins Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 7:52 AM
Hi Debbie - Just opened the window. Need a cooling breeze. love, Kathy
Ainsley Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 7:39 AM
well done!
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 6:41 AM
Debbie this is great. Paints a sensuous image. Warm Smiles, Connie
Manassian Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 12:11 AM
DEBBIEEEEEEEE!!!! OH! MY! What an amazing senryu! Passion to the MAX! Loved it! 7 from humble me to the wordsmith YOU! :)
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