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Palm Court

he palms the mountains
burnishing the pointed peaks
she groans with desire

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/13/2013 3:28:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/5/2013 9:43:00 PM

Great erotica here! Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2013 8:54:00 PM

Congrats, Deb. it was good and hot.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/5/2013 7:16:00 PM

Debbie congratulations on your great win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2013 10:42:00 PM

nice win

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 6/4/2013 10:38:00 PM

Debbie, a bit naughty, very evocative senryu, congratulations on your win!

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/4/2013 11:18:00 AM

Still so hot to the touch!!! The smoke got my attention!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/4/2013 10:43:00 AM

Congrats on your my friend in the contest with this lovely poem. Loved always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/4/2013 10:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Debbie xx

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/1/2013 6:06:00 AM

Sensual indeed.

Joy Wellington

Date: 5/31/2013 11:18:00 PM

Hi Deb...it has been a long time, but the first poem I read on my return and I am again blown away by you the genius. Loving this charismatic sensual piece. One love JoyW

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/31/2013 4:41:00 PM

Sensual one..If for a contest, it will surely win in my book..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I don't know when I will be able to get in there and do congrats..I am behind on everything..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/31/2013 9:33:00 AM

Whew........!! love the title too !!! A senyru that sizzles! ps........many thanks, Deb, for my placement in your "tough" contest!! Cyndi is a STAR !!! Wow.....she knocked it out of the park !!!! Kuddos to her....and to you for getting the best out of her musings!