William Kelii Kekaula Poet Limerick

Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Limerick
Inspired: 2024 May 26

 

*2nd Place*
Palindrome Limerick
Contest Judged: 2024 May 31
Sponsored by: Joseph May

 

Image: N/A

Palindrome: Dumb-old-dork of Exports

Mom spilled hot stew, wets a pal, lap short-shorts,
Dad yelled its hot, loop pool pop dive exhorts,
Mom says not that sort of hot,
Pip, spiced hot that's all it got?
Snot tons, "Jokes--Pip, we're exports, not Hogwarts?"

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Andrea Dietrich June 1, 2024 at 10:37 PM Back with my congrats. Aloha William Kelii Kekaula June 2, 2024 at 1:31 AM Andrea, your nriching kindness is much appreciated, Aloha. William

Joseph May June 1, 2024 at 6:35 AM Very nicely done Hilo, Congrats on your win William Kelii Kekaula June 1, 2024 at 8:41 AM I had fun in the efforts, Joseph, thank you, Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2024 at 8:24 AM Fun palindromes, William. I like to see you doing limericks. William Kelii Kekaula May 27, 2024 at 12:21 PM Andrea, solo's are easy but when they're paired, side-by-side are difficult if one choose to maintain palindromic truths as a simple interfering article fails meaningful dexterity. Mahalo, my friend, blessings, William