Palettes of Red Dawn

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red dawn tickles flirting dragonflies
on palettes kissing wind’s delight 
clusters of boughs  glint on trees
cuddling nectar on arms,
sun whispers love
a twirling feast
all creation
sipping
dew!




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*Inspiration from the best dawn scenes
 in the world: Santa Monica - CA,
The Rocks- Australia, Waikiki Beach-Hawaii,
 Boracay Isle-Philippines

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Contest: Linda- Marie’s Poetic Art
By nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Congrats to you! This is beautiful, but all your writing is lovely. Blessings, Rhonda
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 8:44 PM
On of my favorites in this contest. Bravo on your well deserved win.
Neels Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations Nette on your win with this beauty *hugs* Wilma
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations nette Beautiful xx
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 5:07 PM
Nette, another winning poem, well deserved. Harry, this is a wonderful work. Congrats on your 5th place win in Linda-Marie's contest...................S.Ronthorpe
Pettit Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on your win Nette. Written superbly as usual.
Brown Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 11:25 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Linda Marie's "Poetic Art" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Minardi Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 10:04 AM
Wow, this is magical. Congrats on your win :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 9:52 AM
congrats Nedtte luv on fifth place win for this gorgeous array of lovely words.. your palettes are always a treasure.. thankxxx luv..
Falotico Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 6:48 AM
Excellent entry that Im sure will rise high in the contest.... luv this piece.... luv n hugs Michael
Scholtz Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 4:07 PM
wonderful picture you paint her nette, good luck in contest love Elizabeth
Nair Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 6:50 AM
nette, you have not only the poetic art but poetic heart too, luv, jag
Poet Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 11:06 PM
The poems I write here are mostly my imagination except few .....
Poet Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 11:03 PM
This is just amazing nette.It showcases your great poetic heart.Going to be a chart topper.(re your comment: I am not that type.Some men may be.That is my imagination:)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 10:56 PM
thankxx Nette luv for supporting my contest.. just enteref your too so thankxx for clarification luv.. sometimes I confuse MR..haha.. goodf luck.. anxious to judge this one ..happy weekend..
Sivey Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 9:38 PM
Wow, what a divine write about various dawns! They would be a spectacle to see! "...palettes kissing wind's delight..." is a special line within your poem! I like how you ended the poem as well with the, "...sipping, dew!" What fantastic lines you have written! You've done awesome with this write! Great Work!!
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