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Palettes of Red Dawn

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red dawn tickles flirting dragonflies
on palettes kissing wind’s delight 
clusters of boughs  glint on trees
cuddling nectar on arms,
sun whispers love
a twirling feast
all creation
sipping
dew!




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*Inspiration from the best dawn scenes
 in the world: Santa Monica - CA,
The Rocks- Australia, Waikiki Beach-Hawaii,
 Boracay Isle-Philippines

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Contest: Linda- Marie’s Poetic Art
By nette onclaud

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2012

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/17/2012 1:04:00 PM Congrats to you! This is beautiful, but all your writing is lovely. Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 2/16/2012 8:44:00 PM On of my favorites in this contest. Bravo on your well deserved win. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 2/16/2012 12:18:00 PM Congratulations Nette on your win with this beauty *hugs* Wilma Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/16/2012 5:23:00 AM Congratulations nette Beautiful xx Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 2/15/2012 5:07:00 PM Nette, another winning poem, well deserved. Harry, this is a wonderful work. Congrats on your 5th place win in Linda-Marie's contest...................S.Ronthorpe Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/15/2012 1:27:00 PM Congratulations on your win Nette. Written superbly as usual. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/15/2012 11:25:00 AM Congratulations on your super win in Linda Marie's "Poetic Art" contest Nette. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 2/15/2012 10:04:00 AM Wow, this is magical. Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/15/2012 9:52:00 AM congrats Nedtte luv on fifth place win for this gorgeous array of lovely words.. your palettes are always a treasure.. thankxxx luv.. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 2/12/2012 6:48:00 AM Excellent entry that Im sure will rise high in the contest.... luv this piece.... luv n hugs Michael Login to Reply

Lizanne Scholtz Date: 2/11/2012 4:07:00 PM wonderful picture you paint her nette, good luck in contest love Elizabeth Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 2/11/2012 6:50:00 AM nette, you have not only the poetic art but poetic heart too, luv, jag Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/10/2012 11:06:00 PM The poems I write here are mostly my imagination except few ..... Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/10/2012 11:03:00 PM This is just amazing nette.It showcases your great poetic heart.Going to be a chart topper.(re your comment: I am not that type.Some men may be.That is my imagination:) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/10/2012 10:56:00 PM thankxx Nette luv for supporting my contest.. just enteref your too so thankxx for clarification luv.. sometimes I confuse MR..haha.. goodf luck.. anxious to judge this one ..happy weekend.. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 2/10/2012 9:38:00 PM Wow, what a divine write about various dawns! They would be a spectacle to see! "...palettes kissing wind's delight..." is a special line within your poem! I like how you ended the poem as well with the, "...sipping, dew!" What fantastic lines you have written! You've done awesome with this write! Great Work!! Login to Reply