Palestinian Time Behind Us

Harrowing shifts placating Palestinian patients
Awkwardly healing bones, injuries war caused
Comfort we gave seemed severely insufficient
Soul mates meeting among pain, implausible 

Crutch hobbling boy with copious haphazard grin
Caught both our hearts, we smuggled him chocolate 
You took every free chance to sit and joke with him
Your easy demeanor is medicine, patients responded 

Images of rubble sifting shadow-faced citizens
Inescapable magnitude replayed, dream tethered
Impact we made upon fractured limbs and spirits
Told us each smile gained was worthy endeavour 

I've speculated our distance pronounced our parallels 
A far, foreign land artificially grew our new love found
Strongest logic shows me your benevolence plentiful
Desire stunned us, despite draped shapeless gowns

A year improvising in Gaza's limping hospice system
Threatened to take my buoyancy amongst its tragedy
Compassion you dealt exposed a myriad of wisdom
Guardians of burden bandaged turmoil's inched recovery

Excitement of moving in together, calm logic forgotten
Several short weeks after Gaza, shared goals discussed
A jubilant wedding, white gown without tie backed cotton
Box pile totems, future unpacked together, a time for us




           17th August 2020 

           JCB Burl,   Sponsor

      Contest,   'A Time For Us'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/9/2020 12:29:00 AM
Lovely poem and you have through this love poem uncovered the human suffering that is in the backdrop! very cleverly done!! I have a soft corner for the parts in the world that are suffering because of the selfishness and arrogance of the powerful nations! Sigrid A Fave!
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/9/2020 1:12:00 AM
You're a dear! .... Thank you so much, Krish. Yes, big budgets go to nation's heads. Hearts are after thoughts....
Date: 8/27/2020 2:27:00 PM
It's a great, tragic piece!! Congratulations, Sigrid, on your top win
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/27/2020 3:24:00 PM
Dude! Thanks, Newton!
Date: 8/27/2020 12:34:00 PM
You have a powerful poetic style, Sigrid. Dabbing staccato phrases like Van Gogh piecing together a masterpiece. I had a similar overseas experience. Something about the air in a foreign place. Congratulations on your #1 win with this poem of love formed in a tragic backdrop. ~ John
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/27/2020 1:25:00 PM
I can imagine you were a dedicated missionary, John. Will hopefully uncover a clue in your poems. Thanks for stopping in.
Date: 8/27/2020 9:26:00 AM
Lovely poem Sigrid.. congrats on your TOP win.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/27/2020 1:23:00 PM
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