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Pale Shroud

Pale Shroud A pale moonlit shroud envelopes garden corpses silent reverence abides. Soft breezes rattle amongst trembling outstretched limbs crisp farewell of flaming leaves ©9/6/2017 submitted to – Moonlight Delight – poetry contest

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/13/2017 10:44:00 PM

Gorgeous and poignant write, John - enjoyed it very much! Congrats on your well-deserved win! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2017 4:09:00 PM

I like the second stanza , John, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2017 2:08:00 PM

- Congratulations on your beautiful 4th place, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/9/2017 9:03:00 AM

Congrats!!! John...great entry my friend...Yahoo!!!...^WW^

John Michaels

Date: 9/9/2017 6:36:00 AM

Powerful imagery, John! Congrats on your win. Regards, John.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/6/2017 2:58:00 PM

Hi John, your poem is alive with beautiful poetic expression and imagery. A total joy to read. good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2017 2:35:00 PM

Absolutely love the ghostly imagery John this is really fabulous for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx