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A child shelters ... Under a bloody, swollen moon Yearning the daylight Soft beams show the way But there is no ember ... no brightened clarity No warm-to-the-marrow saturation It is beautied, like the elements of love But it can not fill the sky or heart Wan and weak, it is pale substitute for sunshine Even the shadows it daubs are undefined Puddles of inky disregard and neglect The night's cold, unaffected Love's longing stretches deep into the dark Questions crimping the edge of want Ever nipping at self-worth and pride and expectation But the child's eyes, transfixed ... Moonlight has few equals ... shimmering, beautiful But like love unexpressed, it is ONLY that A word not said, a hand not held ... time not shared A kindness unseen, a sacrifice unappreciated A precious tear not kissed away Moments - small and not - wasted They all hide there in the shadows of the moon Like the dear child ... (Soon grown and gone) Longing for the bold definition of daylight The warming wonder of sunshine The lasting aspect ... Of LOVE. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Your Best New Poem" Poetry Contest, Emile Pinet, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Pale Shelter" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor. ( Inspired by the song "Pale Shelter" by Tears For Fears, and my own childhood )

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Date: 1/1/2020 2:44:00 PM
This is hauntingly beautiful Greg. A poem to ponder and reflect upon. Congratulations on your wonderful second place win. xxoo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/1/2020 3:34:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Sweet Poet, I appreciate that very much! Happy New Year! :o) <3
Date: 12/30/2019 9:32:00 AM
Congrats on another win with this beauty in Emile's contest, I got another N/A no wonder I enter so few contests! lol!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/1/2020 3:33:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly, John, I so greatly appreciate it ... I have a TON of N/A's, my friend, so don't get discouraged - it's all about personal preference, and you are a superb writer and lyricist! I'm happy to remind you anytime, Bud! ;-)
Date: 12/28/2019 8:17:00 PM
BIG congratulations, Greg. I can see the kind of poetry Emile likes from reading yours and Dear Heart's. Ones that tug at the heart strings! You did very very well with the Pale Shelter theme inspiring you. (wish I had had a decent best NEW poem to have entered. haha)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/1/2020 3:32:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Andrea, and I thank you so much! You have MANY decent new poems, are you kidding me? You are silly sometimes, but one of the things I love ya for, Buddy! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 12/28/2019 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations Gregory! Your beautiful poem has placed "Second" in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/1/2020 3:30:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Emile, it is so greatly appreciated - please send the book to Charlie Messina ... he will love it, I'm sure! :o)
Date: 12/8/2019 12:11:00 AM
Hi Gary, Beautiful, strong imagery that carries the theme of your poem. Congratulations.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/15/2019 2:48:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Sam, and I greatly appreciate the wonderful comments! :o)
Date: 12/7/2019 11:19:00 PM
Deep emotions. Congrats on your win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/15/2019 2:47:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Juliet - it's very much appreciated! :o) <3
Date: 12/7/2019 5:37:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Greg
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/15/2019 2:46:00 AM
Thank you very much, Gregory - I greatly appreciate it, friend! :o)
Date: 12/7/2019 2:14:00 PM
Haunting and beautiful! Lonna
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/15/2019 2:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lonna! :o) <3
Date: 12/7/2019 1:53:00 PM
well penned write for the contest Greg, not surprised to see you in first place... congratulations :) hugs
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/15/2019 2:46:00 AM
Oh, that's very sweet of you, Sandra, thank you very much, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 12/7/2019 1:37:00 PM
You touched my heart deeply with this one... keen insight shown as you remember we have similar upbringing... and my love for the moon. Priceless write and congrats on a top win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/15/2019 2:45:00 AM
I knew you would relate to this on multiple levels, John, and I'm pleased that you liked it. Blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 12/4/2019 11:34:00 PM
Very nice rendition of pale shelter Greg. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/15/2019 2:44:00 AM
Many thanks to you, Gregory, much appreciated! :o)

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