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Paisley Embroidered Slumber

She blithely dreams of flitting butterflies, essence of lemon-drop poetry and lighter-than-vapor argent cotton candy castles upon empurpled cloud embellishes, meanwhilst wistfully hot air balloons designed of lilting paisley embroidery inflated with the airy fragrance of wildflowers' whimsied zestfulness merrily drifts furthermost simultaneously burbling curiouser moons & starry dusted whirlwinds gaily prancing 'pon watercolor hues, imagination's perceptibility musing aloud mid sleepyhead synapses' abstractly diffused spheres, she softly ponders if this should be Nirvana my only wish shall evermore be to slumber endlessly

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Date: 11/23/2016 11:12:00 AM
Nirvana, Neverland and Narnia.... surrealistic dream. Love it.
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Date: 11/23/2016 12:46:00 AM
Another skillful write. It dreamily invites me in and leaves me hanging in mid air
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Date: 11/22/2016 3:14:00 PM
Very cool psychedelic poem, Paloma. Empurpled, really. Do you invent a few new words like I do. You got poetic license to do it, you're the best, my dear. Love this poem though. Peace and love to you.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 3:17:00 PM
Thrilled you enjoyed the trip Freddie. Empurple is really a word, I swear. :)
Date: 11/22/2016 11:48:00 AM
Lucy in the sky with diamonds... my first thought. This is some dreamy poem Paloma. Cotton candy castles, where do I sign up?
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Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 12:31:00 PM
Your flight has been booked! :)
Date: 11/22/2016 11:38:00 AM
So beautifully penned Paloma.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 12:31:00 PM
Thrilled you enjoyed Charmaine.
Date: 11/22/2016 7:54:00 AM
Beautiful Paloma! :)
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Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 12:30:00 PM
Merci beaucoup Heidi! :)
Date: 11/22/2016 6:24:00 AM
Now if that's not an enchanting dream one would never want to wake from, I don't know what is. Wow, this is amazing and so filled with whimsy and mesmerizing scenes. Beautifully done Paloma.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thanks Chris, tickled you enjoyed my fantasy.
Date: 11/22/2016 6:22:00 AM
I know that feeling all toooo well! Haha. But then the day begins and sometimes, just sometimes, just as beautiful. Like this poem!
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Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 12:28:00 PM
I've missed you, thanks so much Rick! :)