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Painting With Stardust

From night to night I searched in a distant sky To catch a falling star To collect its silver dust which fell ever so slow upon the life-lines of my hand-palm. From night to night I searched with these ardent eyes for ways to paint you a dream made from diamond shards of a glistening beam. But from night to night the moon in it's grandeur would show filtering its opalescent glow through the bedroom blinds reflecting its amorous lights Outwashing every short-lived star I ever yearned to seek Obscuring other sparkles with its lucent shine. Blinding me in hundred ways Holding me captive in his embrace. But tonight,is a different night Tonight its lunar limbs are cloaked with a mourning veil. Tonight I dance without its shadows and in its darkness I exhale . Tonight I paint with stardust I sprinkle kisses from coppered-flames Forgetting all about the moonrise while I think only about your face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/21/2018 2:38:00 PM
Very sensual, with very evocative imagey.
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Date: 11/4/2017 8:46:00 PM
Such a beautiful, magical and romantic write Charmaine. Full of fantastic imagery. Excellent and enjoyed!
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Date: 5/11/2017 9:17:00 PM
Your poem dances and is full of lovely imagery.
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Date: 5/6/2017 1:39:00 PM
A window into the soul of the author that is pleasing to the heart. Your words play within our hearts, filling us with sensual emotions as you gently take the reader to your fantasy place where feelings drift and love seeks refuge. Wonderful work. Emile. #7
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Date: 5/5/2017 5:54:00 AM
Your comment to my poem took led me to your page, another genius in this club of geniuses (Where I don't belong) Your poems are wonderful!!
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Date: 5/2/2017 4:34:00 AM
I dance with its shadows and in darkness, I exhale! Amazing
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Date: 5/1/2017 4:47:00 PM
So many great poetic lines. So very romantic. Great lyrics and straight to my favs. Lots Of Love always armand.
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Date: 4/28/2017 8:41:00 PM
Congrats Charmaine. You held me under your spell until the very end:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/28/2017 5:09:00 PM
Hi Charmaine , congrats beautiful poem I love every line ' Outwashing every short-lived star ' stunning rate 7 :))) hugs
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Date: 4/28/2017 3:56:00 PM
Very, very beautiful this poem is, Charmaine. Your word-play is superb. Night to night is a most sensuous intro for a poem. Kudos on POTD. Well deserved. Love and hugs.
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Date: 4/28/2017 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Charmaine, such a beautiful poem
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Date: 4/28/2017 12:57:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on POTD Charmaine. This poem is exquisite! 7 ; )
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Date: 4/28/2017 12:53:00 PM
Hello Charma, Congratulations on POTD!! This is a very beautiful and quite enchanting Lyric. SEVEN/FAVE IN MY BOOK!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 4/28/2017 12:46:00 PM
Beautiful Charmaine.Congrats on the POTD!
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Date: 4/28/2017 11:18:00 AM
Hello Charmaine. How beautiful and poetic. Honestly. And yes, how so deserving of POTD. You are such a poetess in the truest fashion. Have a wonderful night.
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Date: 4/28/2017 9:58:00 AM
Wunnerful, Wunnerful, Wunnerful!
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Date: 4/28/2017 8:50:00 AM
Oh thanks to all my friends for reading and commenting...and thankyou tps for potd...Next monday is my birthday...so this is such a lovely gift..thankyou..I love you all :)
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Date: 4/28/2017 8:41:00 AM
Lovely write Charmaine, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 4/28/2017 8:32:00 AM
A very lovely piece. I love it. Congratulation :)
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Date: 4/28/2017 8:20:00 AM
Hi Charma, What a beautiful piece. I see why you received such an honor. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 4/28/2017 8:07:00 AM
A charming write, Charmaine:) congratulations on your POTD:) a 7:)
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Date: 4/28/2017 7:31:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Charmaine :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/28/2017 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Charmaine. You have woven your words so beautiful into the context of your work and vividly puts us in the scene of your tapestry. A Huge 7+
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Date: 4/28/2017 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on the POTD...great choice TPS and great poem Charma...lordy lordy woohoo
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Date: 4/28/2017 6:11:00 AM
Think that Perry Como sang Catch a Falling Star. The copperheads are out around here. Goodbye Rustic Rose. Poetry is such a great way to relieve your frustrations by letting them hang out in a poem. Jim Horn
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