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Painting the Town Red Premiere Contest Winner

In her resting place — she’d toy with shadows, matchsticks and glow in the dark paint. Out and about — she’d fly through the night, wax her teeth and loudly sip her straw. A mordacious-red stain upon her tongue. 1/29/2018 Brian Strand’s Premiere Contest 125 Sevenling Poem

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Date: 3/1/2018 6:25:00 PM
Hello Kim, I just picture this happening. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2018 8:21:00 PM
A little scary...chuckle!
Date: 1/31/2018 5:59:00 PM
ooohhh YES, this is great, Kim. Congrats on top spot.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2018 8:21:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 1/31/2018 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win with this chilling write Kim with a newly invented form. Awesome! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2018 12:13:00 PM
Thanks, Connie!
Date: 1/30/2018 11:58:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your awesome win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2018 7:16:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 1/30/2018 10:01:00 PM
Makes me think of my old goth clubbing days, love "mordacious-red". A sleek sensuous penning Kim! Congratulations on your top win :) xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2018 7:16:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen!
Date: 1/29/2018 4:51:00 PM
Delightful and enjoyable read, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2018 4:57:00 PM
Thanks, Line :)

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