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Painting the Bay II

Laughing, sipping fruity wine, his eyes sparkling into mine. Given a proposal, I can't refuse, smiling, I accept the news. Holding hands this afternoon, as we head toward the room. 6/19/21 Contest: Bite Size Poem No.8 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 7/15/2021 7:32:00 PM
Oh my, is it just me or is it getting hot in here? Off to three.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/16/2021 4:14:00 AM
Thanks for your visit!
Date: 6/20/2021 3:23:00 AM
I'm going to think it's a courthouse room where they'll get married. Nice write, Tania, and leaving the ending open to interpretation is great!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/20/2021 4:28:00 AM
Thank you Jenna!
Date: 6/19/2021 11:57:00 AM
ooh err off to a hotel room to seal the deal = sweet poem Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/19/2021 1:18:00 PM
Maybe or maybe not, thanks Jan! :)
Date: 6/19/2021 6:13:00 AM
Quite a romantic verse Tania, good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/19/2021 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Tom!
Date: 6/19/2021 5:59:00 AM
Romance at its best. Best for a win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/19/2021 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Victor!