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Painting In Blue

I sat up on a cloud today..
I blew on the tree tops to make them sway..
Like wave of paint brushes they colored my sky..
All different shades of blue as the sun passed by..
As the night poured its way, the moon was my light..
Deeper strokes of blue as my cloud was still in sight..
I then feathered my color into the horizon as the stars 
where sprinkled in..
My canvas of a blue sky with brush less trees is where
I've been...



"Blue on Blue on Blue" contest
  ~The Sky~

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Ayla Hughes

Date: 8/11/2011 11:07:00 PM

i really like this one and u really know how to make a clear picture in the mind of your viewers

Dalila Agtani

Date: 7/7/2011 2:24:00 AM

A winning piece Michael! Good luck! Dalila

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/3/2011 6:51:00 PM

This is lovely. it should have been a winner too!

Date: 7/3/2011 4:11:00 AM

A lovely painting in blue Michael, very nicely done. Alexa

Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/2/2011 9:44:00 AM

I like this imagining poem... so fun... If only we could fly, Michael :)

Elizabeth Bark

Date: 7/1/2011 9:45:00 PM

dear micheal. this poem is so great and magical and inspiring. i wish i could only be as half as inspiring as you are. i wish you could see how much you and mrs p.d. mean to me. you guys have helped me grow and mature in poetry and somewhat in life. and no matter what you say you are my knight in shining aromour. thank you so much for being there for me in all my troubles. i dont know what i would do without you...thanks again. love always, elizabeth:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/1/2011 8:15:00 PM

simply and utterly beautiful thoughts and images flowing into each other in beauty my W.K... am on a cloud of blue with u and your thoughts so sweetly penned with deep emotion.. a colorful paint brush luv..your Jersey Girl is awe mode..once more forever and always..luv.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2011 7:57:00 PM

This one was very creative thinking, Michael. I'm glad to see it before getting off here. I just need to type up a narrative but I think I am overdoing it at my computer now. It's my left shoulder and I'll be only a week in a sling. I think I am starting to feel what they did to my back now. haha. Or else it's not good to be sitting here like I am doing! thanks for asking. See ya later. Luv, Andrea