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I paint, and I love to paint the emotions inside the model, in black and white.

I took you in and held you tight, 
I danced into your soul,
And took the rope you balanced on, 
Dislodged your self-control,

To pull apart your shattered heart, 
Rebuild your classic pose,
And paint the lust inside your mind, 
Underneath the clothes,

For me, I had to fuel my pain, 
I had to feel what I had broke,
To create a world that I had lost, 
With every painful stroke,

So I built you up then tore you down, 
I played with what you are,
I captured, on canvas, the truth to you, 
Your hurt, your rent, your scar.


Written 4th Feb entered into Brian's Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/7/2018 8:02:00 AM
This is very well written and rhymed. I like this a lot Lewis. Well done!!.......pat
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/7/2018 8:59:00 PM
Hi, thanks Pat, i'm glad u like this poem, cheers :)
Date: 2/4/2018 9:12:00 PM
Wow, Lewis. Very powerful poem. Have to add it to my FAVES.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/4/2018 9:29:00 PM
thanks Line, i'm glad u liked this one :)
Date: 2/4/2018 7:31:00 PM
Kudos for your imagination...captured in your poem and on canvas.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/4/2018 8:12:00 PM
thanks Vijay, everyone has a painting to live by.