Painting

The paintbrush spreads us all over the canvas
a gallery of our beauty
my hands around picture frames
your face worn as a mask
the wax melts away all of our pain
the fireplace burns the wood 
little pieces fly threw the air
They end their journey
laying on the floor of the darkest place
one lands on the canvas i painted 
Burning it along with our lies
It curls up into little circles
eventually fading away
just like our pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/1/2012 6:42:00 PM
thank you all :D
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Date: 7/29/2012 5:17:00 PM
A belated congrats on your colorful win, Shayla! A vivid and poignant write...Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/27/2012 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Paint The World" contest Shayla. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2012 6:01:00 AM
congrats Shayla on a brilliant write and win luv..
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Date: 7/26/2012 6:36:00 PM
Shayla, congrats on your win with this lovely poem! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/26/2012 2:31:00 PM
A heartfelt write. Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:38:00 AM
Shayla congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 7/26/2012 3:10:00 AM
Beautiful Shayla, congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 6/24/2012 3:08:00 PM
Congrats, Shayla. Excellent. Great job. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 6/23/2012 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "father & beyond" contest Shayla. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2012 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win!!!!
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Date: 6/20/2012 10:09:00 PM
SHAYLA, Congratulations for your heartfelt poem. Thank you for supporting my contest;-) Good night~PD
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