Painting

There she stands,
With her fingers on the railing.
She's holding onto it
As if she only had this chance.

She looks out 
Into the distance
Longing for an answer
To a question 
She does not know

To her,
She simply exists
And she doesn't know how to deal with it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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January 30, 2022 at 1:17 PM
Interesting. The Message to me is feeling stuck. I've been there. I would expand on the poem a little more.
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