Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

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Painted Wounds

Written: September 17, 2023
Lets Minichu on Fear                                  Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani  
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Stop dropping my hand, Dad
The harshness of the epoch agonizes minds
Need to keep my eyes clad

A harsh anguish
Bleak brownout brewing, blunted blinds
Languish

Partake
Passion reminds
Stake

Stop dropping my hand, Dad
Bleak brownout brewing, blunted blinds
Stake

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Linda Alice Fowler October 11, 2023 at 2:33 PM Congratulations Las! :)

Ink Empress October 7, 2023 at 9:08 PM How did i miss this? Brilliant alliterations in this very tricky form! You’ve nailed it with excellent rhymes etc! Congratulations on your win, well deserved

Karen Jones October 7, 2023 at 9:02 PM Congratulations Sotto on a 2nd place win!

Panagiota Romios September 17, 2023 at 11:51 AM A unique individualist style, Sotto! The image amplifies the fear, the boy has!. Reaching for a hand, when comfort is needed, applies to any age! I see a universality in this work, Pangie xx