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Written: September 17, 2023 Lets Minichu on Fear Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani _____________________________________________________________ Stop dropping my hand, Dad The harshness of the epoch agonizes minds Need to keep my eyes clad A harsh anguish Bleak brownout brewing, blunted blinds Languish Partake Passion reminds Stake Stop dropping my hand, Dad Bleak brownout brewing, blunted blinds Stake

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Date: 10/11/2023 2:33:00 PM
Congratulations Las! :)
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Date: 10/7/2023 9:08:00 PM
How did i miss this? Brilliant alliterations in this very tricky form! You’ve nailed it with excellent rhymes etc! Congratulations on your win, well deserved
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Date: 10/7/2023 9:02:00 PM
Congratulations Sotto on a 2nd place win!
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Date: 9/17/2023 11:51:00 AM
A unique individualist style, Sotto! The image amplifies the fear, the boy has!. Reaching for a hand, when comfort is needed, applies to any age! I see a universality in this work, Pangie xx
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