Painted Wall

On the wall not a bare spot is seen
On the door and the door and between
You admire and you say
It’s perfect ev’ry way
Then a fly takes a rest painted green

for Michael’s “fly on he wall" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 9:53 PM
AHA, now I see what happened with that wall. Very clever, and I see you have been busy with liimericks I have not caught sight of yet! Luv, Andrea
Omaidin Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Clever clever Limerick, great beat to it, should do well. Delighted to see I featured 7th in the haiku competition, am chuffed, thanks Déirdre
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