Painted Perfection

As a child
I saw the world
a painted perfection
with rainbows, flowers
and butterflies
seeing only bright colors
and living in sunshine

When the adult
grew into those eyes
I saw no perfection
only that which
painted the world gray
leaving the child inside
to die in the night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 12:39 AM
How sad Tiffanie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 9:57 AM
Terrific poem Tiffanie, well written>>James
Brown Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 4:48 AM
Tiffanie, you have an outstanding write here. Beautiful and sad at the same time. I truly enjoyed the read. Love, Carol
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 5:28 AM
Wow.Very Well done.You really hurt my soul-->To my favs!
Devonshire Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 10:50 PM
You convey well the impact of losing a child's innocent perpective on life. Too bad we can't all grow up and still see "painted perfection" in God's handiwork. Very nice, Tiffanie! Love, Carolyn
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