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Painted On the Sea

The exotic sailboat glimmered orange gold,
And it appeared to be painted on the sea,
As if its last stop were dawn's threshold,
To cast elongated mirror images, so pretty!

Sun sits on water, the boat is in the sun,
Rise and take a look, before a dream ends,
For the azure sea is a multicolored vision,
As a gilded sailboat goes around the bend!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 10:09 AM
WOW!!! What a colorful write and picture. So Pretty. I wish I was on your sailboat. Have a blessed day writing away................
Buehler Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 10:45 AM
Thank you so much for letting me know of your pleasure in this sunrise poem, Paula. I'm delighted. Have a blessed day yourself, Evelyn :)
Proxenos Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Your pic looks like a dazzling moment of pure ecstacy 'For the azure sea is a multicoloured vision. Breathtaking poetry my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Proxenos Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 1:31 PM
Hi Evelyn, you might enjoy my poem - our wild life beckons which I have recently posted. hugs, Jennifer.
Buehler Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 10:43 AM
Your enjoyment of my poem and picture are deeply gratifying, Jennifer. Thank you so much. Kindest regards, Evelyn :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:31 PM
Hello Evelyn, this is beautifully done. I love the picture I see. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Hello Evelyn, Your welcome my friend. enjoy your day.
Buehler Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 7:57 PM
Help Darlene, I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. Thank you very much. Have a lovely evening. Hugs.
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 5:55 AM
You painted a beautiful picture. Great imagery. Very creative. This requires high poetic skills. A beautiful poem that transports readers to a wonderful place. Have a wonderful day ahead friend
Buehler Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 11:19 AM
I am happy to know you enjoyed this poem so. Thank you, Rama, for your joy inspiring remarks. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 11:07 PM
What an inspiration from this painting. Beautiful verse.
Buehler Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Thank you very much. :D
Poet Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 7:46 PM
A gorgeous poem and picture, Evelyn, You have the blessing of nature's beauty--enjoyed the read. Warm hugs
Buehler Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 9:23 PM
I sure am delighted you did, Lasaad. Thank you for the sunny comment, dear friend.
Hankins Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 6:43 PM
So true. There are so many marvelous, exotic sights across the water. You have captured a scintillating one, Evelyn. Beautiful!
Buehler Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 7:30 PM
Thank you for your warm remarks, and for enjoying the sunrise with me, my friend. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
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