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The exotic sailboat glimmered orange gold, And it appeared to be painted on the sea, As if its last stop were dawn's threshold, To cast elongated mirror images, so pretty! Sun sits on water, the boat is in the sun, Rise and take a look, before a dream ends, For the azure sea is a multicolored vision, As a gilded sailboat goes around the bend!

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Date: 6/24/2021 10:09:00 AM
WOW!!! What a colorful write and picture. So Pretty. I wish I was on your sailboat. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/24/2021 10:45:00 AM
Thank you so much for letting me know of your pleasure in this sunrise poem, Paula. I'm delighted. Have a blessed day yourself, Evelyn :)
Date: 6/23/2021 10:35:00 AM
Your pic looks like a dazzling moment of pure ecstacy 'For the azure sea is a multicoloured vision. Breathtaking poetry my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/23/2021 1:31:00 PM
Hi Evelyn, you might enjoy my poem - our wild life beckons which I have recently posted. hugs, Jennifer.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/23/2021 10:43:00 AM
Your enjoyment of my poem and picture are deeply gratifying, Jennifer. Thank you so much. Kindest regards, Evelyn :)
Date: 6/22/2021 12:31:00 PM
Hello Evelyn, this is beautifully done. I love the picture I see. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/24/2021 10:22:00 AM
Hello Evelyn, Your welcome my friend. enjoy your day.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/22/2021 7:57:00 PM
Help Darlene, I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. Thank you very much. Have a lovely evening. Hugs.
Date: 6/22/2021 5:55:00 AM
You painted a beautiful picture. Great imagery. Very creative. This requires high poetic skills. A beautiful poem that transports readers to a wonderful place. Have a wonderful day ahead friend
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/22/2021 11:19:00 AM
I am happy to know you enjoyed this poem so. Thank you, Rama, for your joy inspiring remarks. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Date: 6/21/2021 11:07:00 PM
What an inspiration from this painting. Beautiful verse.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/22/2021 11:20:00 AM
Thank you very much. :D
Date: 6/21/2021 7:46:00 PM
A gorgeous poem and picture, Evelyn, You have the blessing of nature's beauty--enjoyed the read. Warm hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/21/2021 9:23:00 PM
I sure am delighted you did, Lasaad. Thank you for the sunny comment, dear friend.
Date: 6/21/2021 6:43:00 PM
So true. There are so many marvelous, exotic sights across the water. You have captured a scintillating one, Evelyn. Beautiful!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/21/2021 7:30:00 PM
Thank you for your warm remarks, and for enjoying the sunrise with me, my friend. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn

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