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Pain on Repeat

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Success is stumbling from failure to failure with no loss of enthusiasm.

--Winston Churchill


inflamed tendon in tight confinement
compassionately curses
the teacup’s trigger burn

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/19/2024 11:46:00 AM

Kim, I hope this is not a pain you have. The pains like this are so annoying indeed, and I am speaking from experience!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2024 2:51:00 PM

Getting better. Thanks, Duke!

Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/17/2024 9:12:00 AM

Wonderful and wise with realistic touch and effortless antithesis and alliteration. Warm regards

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2024 3:08:00 PM

Thank you very much, Silpika!

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/15/2024 2:49:00 AM

hope pain, will disappear soon, so nice reading you, take care

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2024 3:08:00 PM

Thank you, Yann!

Brenda J. Joyce

Date: 3/14/2024 1:33:00 PM

Wow! I felt the constraints tugged I enjoyed this work dear Writer very much.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2024 2:11:00 PM

Thanks, Joyce!

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/14/2024 6:51:00 AM

Well that rules you out Kim as a suspect in my massaging the figures post lol! I hope that tendon settles down in your hand, the quote is a little bit suspect, I would’ve put optimism, instead of success, but I’m no Churchill! Nice Kimo Kim, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/14/2024 3:04:00 PM

Ok I’ll change it to hope ;)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2024 2:13:00 PM

No, you’re Kavanagh ;)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/14/2024 4:15:00 AM

Great Kimo, Kim. One must never give up. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2024 5:54:00 AM

Never give up, my sweet friend! Hugs!

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/13/2024 11:54:00 PM

Delete delete this bad repeat..' I hope it ceases For you anyway Kim.' May God bless you.'

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2024 3:42:00 AM

Thank, Joe! You know how things go pain upon pain…but I’m alright. :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/13/2024 8:30:00 PM

Love this splendid, relatable poem, and its accompanying quote, Kim. A brilliantly composed kimo!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2024 3:42:00 AM

Thanks, Evelyn! :)

Peter Dome

Date: 3/13/2024 8:30:00 PM

Didn't understand it first. I'm only a man very clever. My favourite quote of Churchill is, '' Pigs are lovely animals. Dogs look up to you, Cats look down, but Pigs, accept you as their own. Pete.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2024 3:43:00 AM

LOL!

Paige Hind

Date: 3/13/2024 6:14:00 PM

I don't know how you come up with some of these ideas - loved this. Hugs xx

Paige Hind
Date: 3/13/2024 8:00:00 PM

Oh, I thought something else about this poem. I'm sorry you have arthritis. Have you ever had a toothache? LOL....anyways, it's not fun for you, I'm sure. Hope you find some good pain medication. Hugs, just me!

Bill Baker

Date: 3/13/2024 5:26:00 PM

Ouch! that hurts just reading about it, Kim. A hard injury to get over because it takes a lot of patience and a lot of time, my friend. Nice Kimo! Hope it gets better soon if a real injury. Blessings, Bill

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 3/13/2024 4:54:00 PM

O Kim nice Kimo! Nice title too :-)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/13/2024 4:31:00 PM

I love it Kim the agony shines through hugs Shadow

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/13/2024 3:17:00 PM

I hear you...arthritis in my hands, when I forget to do my daily exercises a simple thing like opening a jar or picking up a teacup is very painful.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2024 1:54:00 PM

- ai -ai -ai... painful - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2024 2:30:00 PM

ay yi yi… ;)