Pain of Parting

Pain of parting






As parting slivers my heart
and leaves my soul bleeding,
Memories of togetherness
turn into thorns of prickly longing.





Written Dec 28th, 2015
For "deep and dark" poetry contest 
Sponsor- Broken Wings

Awarded HM
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 15, 2016 at 10:12 PM
DR UPMA, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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January 8, 2016 at 7:32 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Deep and Dark win. **SKAT**
Inman Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Beautiful short write. Heartbreaking emotions.
Kimathi Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Very emotional verse indeed..... Congrats for your WIN in the contest Dr. Upma! ;-)
Lane Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:59 AM
I loved your choice of words, Upma. Well done.
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:52 PM
Dr. Upma A. Sharma, Congratulations on your win!
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