Pain is Strange
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I'm hoping for the best. Nine months of pain misdiagnosed, booted, medicated, finally dignosed as sciatica...we will see...Hoping for the best! Hurts to drive and walk. Trying Aqua Therapy and waiting on a shot.
pain is strange
its range
you can walk
it inhibits
how fast
more than that
it hurts
now I get it
no one knows
but the soul
who lumbers
along
I look and see
all the other bumblebees
and my buzz
resounds
in my own
head
it’s not
that no one
cares
it’s more
that so many
are limping
you only notice
when
you have
the same
ailment
oh boy, age
is deranged
arrange yourself
in the lineup
point
point
point
what’s the point
“OUCH!”
Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2025
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