Pain and Rain

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This poem came as I sat watching a spring rain wash nature clean.

Pain and Rain

On a wet, spring day
Branches drip loneliness.
Sunbeams stream gentleness
Pain and rain stain the soul.
Distance separates.
Ablutions wash winter's grime.
Absolution is near.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/5/2017 3:19:00 AM
A rainy day is a perfect day to write poetry. Writing somehow soothes the soul. Congratulations on your lovely win Kathleen! : )
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 9/5/2017 8:48:00 PM
Thank you, Connie.
Date: 8/11/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, John, It is always so good to hear from you. I'm rather in the same place. The summer hasn't been my best time for writing. I have a number started but the words don't seem to be flowing. Looking forward to Jan-Feb when we'll be on the CA coast. The ocean is so soothing. Best wishes to you as you move forward with your writing!
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Date: 8/11/2017 11:02:00 AM
This is very nice, Kathleen...very nice indeed. Thought it was time I should call around and see how you keeping these days? Well I hope! I have not had many spare hours for poetry of late; I intend to get down to some serious writing very soon. All my warmest regards, Kathleen - And my very best wishes as always! :) john
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Date: 8/11/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, John, It is always so good to hear from you. I'm rather in the same place. The summer hasn't been my best time for writing. I have a number started but the words don't seem to be flowing. Looking forward to Jan-Feb when we'll be on the CA coast. The ocean is so soothing. Best wishes to you as you move forward with your writing!
Date: 6/19/2017 9:11:00 AM
Kathleen, congrats on your win with this lovely poem! Janice
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Date: 6/19/2017 1:49:00 AM
Deep and thought provoking. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/18/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thanks, Connie! Kathy
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Date: 6/18/2017 3:55:00 PM
This poem is very lovely Kathleen. I love the cleansing rain. Have a beautiful Father's Day. : )
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 6/18/2017 7:33:00 PM
Thanks, Connie.
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