Pain

Pain, which of my pains derides me more
The pain of love that no longer flows
The pain of suffering along life’s weaving path
Or the pain of knowing you’re no longer here

No longer here for me, yet still exists
Painful memories revolve in my hurting brain
Why can’t life be a simple act of breathing, living
Not a painful burden to be shouldered alone

Pain in the heart can be one a surgeon can help
Yet knowing deep down the knife cannot cure
The pain of knowing, of living a dream
Why not let me die……. pain no more

When I lay there pale of skin, 
Creases of pain no longer line my face 
Don’t cry for me as I have lived ……
No more to cry out in inhuman tones…. 
…….all is at peace……

Penned 12 November 2016
Contest:  Shooting Blank Verse - John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Oh the pain,I know pain, I am trying to heal from the pain.When it hurts ...it hurts.This poem is about pain.I hope whoever suffers from some sort of pain will heal. Anyway this a enjoyable poem to read.
Roberts Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 1:21 PM
hello Darlene remember when you are healed don't leave a scar....Seren
White Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 4:47 AM
Pain, I know a line or two about that one too... Wonderfully put into words. Good luck in the contest
Roberts Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 1:26 PM
Pain is in the mind as well as actual just have to sort out which is which....Seren
Roper Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Good poem, Seren, good luck in the contest. Hugs eve
Roberts Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 1:27 PM
thanks Eve...Seren
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:37 PM
When I go I expect you to celebrate my life with a couple of pints...great poem
Roberts Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 1:28 PM
hmmm think maybe your the one to get drunk first....Seren
Vaso Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:35 PM
This is very raw and filled with emotion, a fav!
Roberts Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 1:29 PM
thank you....Seren
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