"pain"

I'm feeling is as if I fell into my own black hole
 Been Having this feeling for days now how does it stop?
 Or does it, it's as if I'm cutting myself with this long sharp object over in this drawer 
 Mind is wandering now,I bet yours is to, what could I be thinking?

 "Love" the most painful thing you could ever experience 
  Never have I thinking of giving the "opposite sex" my love 
  It's to fragile,too sensitive to just give it away so easily 
  One minute you may have had "love" but it can be taken away in just seconds  

  Thinking, Thinking, Thinking........ falling from the sky having no where to land
  Pain in my heart longing for someone to be near instead I hear,and feel nothing
  All alone forever no hope for anything ever,just staying in a safe secure area
  
  Never experiencing excitement, to preserved for that too "classy"
  Not taking chances scared of any disappointment  that follows after "Living your Life"
  Mind is wandering, wandering...........Thinking,Thinking, Thinking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/6/2010 3:45:00 PM
Thanks Adrian Torbenson everything worked ouy fine i am continuing 2 write
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Date: 11/19/2009 8:24:00 PM
very sad i hope all works out for you stay strong... keep writing
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