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Pain

Pain is good I know I’m Alive In a world of hate in a world of lies No one can see what is happening to me Personal hatred in my personal life Agonizing pain caused from my lies Inside I wish that I could just die No one can see that all I am is a lie People don’t see me nobody cares Anguish and hatred is all I see there Intent on relief a razor I hold Nicking my skin I don’t care what I’m told Peace is all that I want, can Anyone hear me Involved with my life No one can see me Pain, sharp pain as I slice my wrist After life’s gone that’s all that I wish Incentive for life is all but gone Never will feel cause my life is done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/19/2009 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations on this poem being featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 6/15/2009 10:36:00 AM
Rebecca. Congratulations, but this poem...beautiful as it is, disturbs me. I hope you don't mean these words, but how could you write them otherwise? Someone does care...my ex-husband recently killed himself and I am very sensitive to the mention of suicide. Life is HARD, but it is beautiful even in its pain. Keep writing. Keep living, Rebecca. Patricia Langston-Moran
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Date: 6/15/2009 7:45:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rebecca. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:37:00 AM
Congrats Rebecca on "Pain" being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/14/2009 10:45:00 PM
Rebecca - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/3/2009 7:44:00 AM
emoyional piece, great flow of rhymes and passionate words.. great you
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