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Pain

To love someone who couldn’t love back the same way Only to be used and than discarded for there own selfish needs Left out in a storm filled with darkness, no meaning why, but left Hunkering down as the storm unleashes its worst upon your heart and soul Bearing to witness the pain and sorrow of days and weeks to months It feels like hell Letting go isn’t an option

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Date: 9/25/2023 11:22:00 AM
This is so well written and expressed, i can feel this and i think many can resonate. Especially with lines such as “ to love someone who couldnt love back” unrequited love or to be left bleeding whilst still in love can be one thats hard to move on from! Felt this
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Paul Murray
Date: 9/25/2023 12:52:00 PM
Thank you, the pain is real
Date: 9/24/2023 4:19:00 PM
Persevere dear you are worthy of love. Hugs
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Paul Murray
Date: 9/24/2023 4:22:00 PM
Thank you

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