Pain

Beginning with the juicy bite of a red, sweet, green, sour snow-white fruit. The teeth chattering with sinful pain down to the narcissistic root. The cross, Christ’s sacrifice, finished the demonic dispute. 2/7/2023

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/11/2023 4:04:00 PM

Swell, in a nut shell. You said it all! Great write my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2023 7:38:00 AM

I like how you describe the fruit of the garden that once eaten brought forth the inherited sinful nature of mankind until Jesus. I appreciate you sharing this faith-based work. Your visits to my page add such a nice touch. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2023 9:07:00 AM

Thank you, Sara!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/7/2023 11:09:00 PM

He took on his shoulders all the sins of this world, from the beginning to the end. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2023 5:50:00 AM

The weight of that, no man could handle.