Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Pain

Beginning with the juicy bite of a
red, sweet, green, sour snow-white fruit.

The teeth chattering with sinful pain
down to the narcissistic root.

The cross, Christ’s sacrifice,
finished the demonic dispute.

2/7/2023

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Bill Baker February 11, 2023 at 4:04 PM Swell, in a nut shell. You said it all! Great write my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick February 8, 2023 at 7:38 AM I like how you describe the fruit of the garden that once eaten brought forth the inherited sinful nature of mankind until Jesus. I appreciate you sharing this faith-based work. Your visits to my page add such a nice touch. Sara Kim Rodrigues February 8, 2023 at 9:07 AM Thank you, Sara!

Victor Buhagiar February 7, 2023 at 11:09 PM He took on his shoulders all the sins of this world, from the beginning to the end. Hugs Kim Rodrigues February 8, 2023 at 5:50 AM The weight of that, no man could handle.