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Paid In Full

P ierced for our transgressions, A crown of thorns upon His head. I ndecent agony Jesus suffered, D ying to give us life instead. I niquities demanded payment. N one of us worthy to pay the price. F aithful Father provided ransom, U nfailing love turned into sacrifice. L aying down His life for sinners, L isten: Jesus paid sin's full price. 2/20/12 for Brian Strand's up to 12 lines max. contest 1st place

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Terry L. Allen

Date: 4/9/2012 8:02:00 PM

Well planned out and well written. A job well done. You might like my poem my ABC's for God.

Chrysanthemum Flower

Date: 2/26/2012 8:31:00 PM

I usually don't like acrostic poems that much, but yours was very inspring! Well done.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/26/2012 11:28:00 AM

This is such an inspiring, acrostic Kim! Super congrats on all your wins :) And thank you for passing by my poems :D and congrats on all your wins!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/25/2012 5:45:00 PM

Wonderful acrostic - congrats on your win! Fav poem :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2012 4:12:00 PM

I see you got on the winner's list with your wonderful poem. Big congrats to you.

Jack Horne

Date: 2/25/2012 12:25:00 PM

Beautiful spiritual piece, Kim. Many congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/25/2012 10:57:00 AM

A great acrostic poem for Lent and all year long.

Erich Goller

Date: 2/23/2012 12:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, a very nice expressed poem.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/22/2012 11:03:00 AM

This is a beauty and you told it with such eloquence Kim.. Congratulations as well ;) love Wilma

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/21/2012 7:51:00 PM

Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2012 2:58:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Great testimony of your faith..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the faithfulness in reading my work..Sara

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/21/2012 2:03:00 PM

Kim, beautiful acrostic. Really well done, I enjoyed it. Congrats on placing on Brian's winners' list........................S.Ronthorpe

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/21/2012 2:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Kim, with this wonderful Acrostic, love Elizabeth ps Thank you for your comments.

Jeffry Cohan

Date: 2/21/2012 12:22:00 PM

DIDN'T I EVER TELL YOU THAT JESUS DIDN'T REALLY WALK ON WATER...HE WAS SIMPLY STANDING IN THE MIDDLE OF A HUGE PUDDLE AND GOT ENOUGH GROUPIES TO BUY INTO HIS RUSE, AND AS FOR WATER INTO WINE....IF HIS DADDY, INDEED, WAS GOD ALL HIS DAD HAD TO DO WAS INVENT GRAPE KOOL-AID?...SHOOT, EVEN I COULD HAVE PULLED THAT RUSE OFF WITH APLOMB...THIS POEM, NONETHELESS, AS USUAL IS BITTER SWEET WHILE IT'S AUTHOR IS SIMPLY SWEET AND TALENTED AS HER GOD MEANT FOR HER TO BE, WHICH IS HUGELY! KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO TO ME, YOUR POETRY MAKES ME FEEL INFERIOR WHICH THUSLY PROVOKES ME TO KEEP WRITING POEMS THAT ARE AS PROVOCATIVE AND I LIKED THE WAY YOU USED THE FIRST LETTER...I HAD A POEM LIKE THAT ABOUT A CHICK NAMED LISA BUT I AM PROHIBITED FROM ENTERING IT BECAUSE OF WHAT THE LETTERS OF HER NAME MEAN.....NO PROFANITY AND STARS DON'T FIT THE ANGER IN THAT POEM....YOUR'S 4 AS LONG AS YOUR GOD DECIDES TO STOP SOME MORONIC LEADER OF A COUNTRY FROM PRESSING THE RED BUTTON PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

Kash Poet

Date: 2/21/2012 12:09:00 PM

Very good Acrostic by you Kim.Congrats on your win.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/21/2012 11:59:00 AM

Congrats, Kim. Beautiful, well deserved win. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/21/2012 10:12:00 AM

congrats Kim on a fantastic first place win for lovely words luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2012 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in ~Brian Strand's~ "Any Poem with Max 12 Lines" contest *Kim*. Love, Carol

Dalila Agtani

Date: 2/21/2012 1:35:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this inspirational poem Kim. Truly I do believe Jesus Christ paid our sins in full. Good luck to you on the contest. Love Dalila

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/20/2012 11:20:00 PM

How did I miss this earlier? Wow, this is a wonderful acrostic full of truth. We have a Father who loves us this much and yet so many choose to turn away from Him. When I think of how much He suffered for me, I cannot believe I'm worth it. He deserves this praise and so much more...an amazing love. Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2012 5:45:00 PM

Awesome acrostic line you showcased, Kim. Good luck in Brian's contest.

Don Johnson

Date: 2/20/2012 5:11:00 PM

true story of the saviours time, on the planet water to wine, raised ol Lasarus from the dead, people followed where eer he led, till crucifyxion line... well remembered... well done here Kim

Don Johnson
Date: 2/20/2012 11:07:00 PM

Jesus saves said sign on tree, dumb mate Jack hacked it you see, strike me dead Lord says he, week later an 18 wheeler came and got he.. true story from johnson, me....

Dan Kearley

Date: 2/20/2012 1:53:00 PM

Very nice Kim,so full of truth.. :o)

Erich Goller

Date: 2/20/2012 1:11:00 PM

That's a wonderful and inspirational poem' I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Shirley Long

Date: 2/20/2012 12:14:00 PM

What a wonderful poem, I loved reading it about our Savior Jesus, He paid the price for our sins, and your poem describes it all.