Constance La France Poet Choka

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Pages In Time

In recollections-
of my life's journey, thus far
the tattered pages flutter
     in my mind, snapshots  . . .
black and white and color, drift- 
faces, glimpses of places.

And I stand trembling-
as wind takes my tangled hair
I walk a green tree lined path
     the birds are singing  . . . 
I open a rusty, gate-
holding, a dew wet red rose. 

And I see your name-
like wings pages are floating
I want to run from this place
     the weeping so loud . . . 
it is ripping out my, heart- 
turn, this page for I must leave.

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July 19, 2016


Poetry/Choka/Pages In Time
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Eve Roper November 9, 2017 at 1:36 PM this is so very beautiful,Broken Wings, I feel your love in this write ... Hugs Eve ~`*

James Inman November 9, 2017 at 6:37 AM This is heart wrenching.

Scott Thirtyseven November 9, 2017 at 6:34 AM Wonderful poem, looks like a great form. Thanks for showing us how.

Andrea Dietrich November 8, 2017 at 5:40 PM Another excellent model for us. Wish I could see all of them, but I have to start dinner soon. Please will you soupmail me if dizain needs to be 2 x ababbccdcd? Or when you said two stanzas, were you separating into five lines each like in the other poem of yours I saw? You were really busy to come up with all these lovely examples for us. Constance La France November 8, 2017 at 6:24 PM I want 2 verses of the Dizain form for a total of 20 lines in my contest, Empty Your Soul With Words and thanks for visiting.